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Read Morein my waiting time I think of youpure beauty and longingwistful understanding to desireyour western drawl remindeds me of summermy passion stirred and I feel the pangs againto go down south and meet you barefoot in the grassmy soul...
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Makes me want to hop on the saddle. 😉
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giggles thank you dearest Jim ❤️
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👅
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with amazing imagery and wordplay my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love on this ❤️
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hello lovely poetess thank you graciously for such a sexy comment ❤️
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NO – A nice one. 😉
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Read MoreI wonder, after all these years,If she still considers herself luckyTo have landed a fishOf such colour and tenacity.Or,Does she now only seeFaded beautySans scales, sans colour, sans vitalityYet still attached to her hook?I ask myself the same questions...
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend this one has layers. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreTaste the rain, a first drop whispercool fire from the corner of my mouth like cognac, a hundred-thousand kisses on tap tasting my skin, after midnight
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with layers of depth my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Since I have not been posting because of work I am trying to give a little more. Thanks cuz
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Chère F.,
How can someone be powerful and sweet at the same time?
Lovely, what a lot of ‘tastes’ in one poem!Warm regards, Gus
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Thank you, Gus, for the compliment.
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and You my friend “stole” our interest and attention once again with your passionate and exquisite writing. I respect how each couplet both shows and tells us a story. Fantastic poem!
An espresso con panna to you.
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Thank you so much for that. Espresso con panna thank you Clay;))
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🙂
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Enough said with a smile. Thank you, Jim;))
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Oooh, very clever!
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Thank you, Willow :))
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Really like that ending, tight
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Thank you ME:))
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