This needs a follow-up, Brenda, because, it’s so good.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. A very bittersweet write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Fantastic Brenda. Your poetry always shines, whether it’s dark or not. Nice work.xo

Simple pleasures, and small feats. Great write Peter. xx

Beautifully penned, Peter. It’s the little things. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks Damian and PG….it’s a long day without a cup of tea, so get in early.No.matter what my mood a piping hot cuppa moves it for a while.
I guess so does bourbon but not at six on the morning.

Hoi hoi Peter,
That’s a qualitea poem. Hats off.
Love it a lot. Leave it up to me to murder your language.

If you are American: Thank you!
In all other cases: keep ‘em coming, please.

Kind regards, Gus

Tragic, painful, sadness. This poem has so much hurt but brilliantly written Brenda. Great!

Powerfully penned, Brenda. This one tugs at the heartstrings my friend. I can feel the hurt in your words. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

With lost things can never be the same, but you can still move forward. Sad piece Lady

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful work. You paint this scene well.

dark, delectable, demonic, dirtily dished-out-damnation of the damsel’s sexual soul – I loved it, Crimsin! Harriet-Jacqui xx

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian