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Read MoreCup of Asian noodlesSome Japanese cartoonsHaven’t showered in three weeksMy time is coming soon It's time to eat some RamenBought at the dollar storeAnd in the name of SatanWatch some bizarre tentacle porn Pour some boiling waterPull out your favorite bowlCover...
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Thanks man
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Well to have ramen and thinking about bizarre tentacle porn is one way to kill time. lol
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Yes it is! Thanks Fia..xxx
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Read Morewill you walk with me?hand in handas today fades into tomorrowour silhouettes on the horizonoutlined in memoryforever captured in timecan you hear my heart speak?whispering a thousand names...with every hopeful beatas we gather under sunset's kissburning yesterday's pain awaysinking...
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Fantastic!
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Thank you! Glad you found a spot by the fire! 🔥
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yes, Willow, I will walk with you and everyone here wherever the trail may go. Incredible, inspiring write, and much needed read on this first day of the poetic year!
with heartfelt thanks
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We need community and hope more than ever these days. If the fire burns low, we’ll just gather more kindling. Thank you, Clay
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hello beautiful Willow this is very uplifting the current climate of fear is getting to me I fear a lot…this put my mind at peace❤️
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We have to take the moments one breath at a time these days, and build our community so strong we hold each other up. They’re doing their best to bring us down. Gotta keep the fires of hope burning 🧡
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This is such a beautiful song. Very powerful and you are absolutely right, we need community. Thank you for this.
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Can’t let the fire go out. It takes all of us. Thank you, Fia 🧡
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Brilliantly penned, Willow. Now that’s a bonfire! Excellent lyrics with an amazing musical arrangement. Really liked the drums in this my friend. That third stanza worked as a bridge, I really loved the build to that moment, the bridge brought it all home. It was also the heaviest part of the song with the drums working like exclamation points to your words. When my brother was a drummer in a certain band, I often referred to him as: “The Human Exclamation Point.” Drummers help put emphasis on lyrics in my opinion. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Drums are the beat we march to. Definitely the punctuation. I think I wanted a strong drum rhythm there to keep the energy building, keep the fire burning and hope going. Thank you, my friend. I’ll be bringing wood as needed to keep it going
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This feels like walking alongside the poem itself—hand in hand through both shadow and light. I love how it turns struggle into hope, and hope into a quiet, unshakable victory.
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So often we have to transition from one emotion and strength to the next. We’ve just endured one helluva year and we gotta build ourselves up and hold to our community to get through the upcoming days, but we can do it and come out the other side. Thank you, Thomas 🧡
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Yes I will walk together with you and in hand, dear Willow, and burn yesterday’s pain to substitute it with new hope which you inspire so brilliantly with this masterpiece!
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I think we’re long overdue. And we’ll need another infusion before long, I’m sure. I needed to rest my lungs from screaming. I’m sure I’ll be screaming again in a minute, but right here, right now, we need to build the fire. Thank you, Elke 🧡
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The unifying spirit of this song reaches beyond the soul. Very beautiful.
Much respect
Naaj
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Community is all we have these days. So…we need to build it as strong as possible. Thank you, Naaj
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Awwwwwwww nice!
This is like sugar for day old coffee, making it tolerable. Like a rare seashell after the bombardment of the ocean’s waves.
Thank you for this treasure of a poem. It’s a gem.-
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Gotta keep the fire going. Now more than ever. Thank you, Styxian
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This is not only poetry but something else beside .. I could probably both read and listen to it pretty much round the clock .. Neville 😎💛⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻👍
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Trust me, I wrote the thing and there have been days when I did listen to it on repeat. I’ll be blowing the place up with rants, but I’m keeping this fire going. Thank you, Neville 🧡
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Read MoreThe studio on 4th Street was the place they needed to beHope & determination was in their minds, that they can change societyThey were considered the outcasts outside of their communitySongs being created in Greenwich Village that weren't so...
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I think everyone has their favorite time period. favorite line “In the evening, the beatniks and the long haired girls came too
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Awesome! Thanks Fia..xo
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Beautifully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend I dig writes involving music. Cool photo, I knew instantly that was a young Robert Zimmerman. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the comment Damian. Thank you!!
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Hoi hoi @Visions,
What a lovely write!
And – assuming that you took the inspiration off the photo – what a lovely prompt.I was taken back a bit when I saw the litter on the pavement. Let’s hope that that is remedied now.
If you’re a serious fan of Bob’s, you may be interested in other stuff than his music.
Paintings, train wagon, his record collection. I may be able to help you there.
If so, please send a PM or mail.
Not his own music, I must add.I think your post is a very valuable one.
If you’re American:
Thank you.
In all other cases:
Keep them coming please.
Kind regards, Gus-
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Hello Gus. Thank you so much for the generous feedback. And yes I’m American. Born & raised in NY.
Peace!
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Dear K,
Wonderful vibe. This piece had me thinking about each generation creating their own progressive ideas that will right the wrongs of the current one so to speak. But the 60’s…that generation was seriously like no other before, or after. Terrific write. H🌷
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I wasn’t alive yet in the 60’s, but damn, the youth had such piss & vinegar against the establishment. There was no choice but for the government to stop, look & listen. Thanks for the generous comment.
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Once again you succeeded and writing and Article as powerful as meaningful on an important chapter of music history, Artists, and especially musicians were most often the ones to kick off change of social and political rules and customs. The Beatles and their generation initiated a real big innovation.
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Thank you very much Elke.
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I believe I read this on WC. It’s just as good the second time reading it. Your photo cements the character of the poem. A snapshot in time I wish I could have experienced. Dylan was a poet with a guitar. Excellent writing.
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Thanks Tim. I wrote this originally on DUP. Appreciate the kind words and feedback.
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AHH, that’s where I probably saw it.
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Myself, born in 1963. Let’s just get back there.
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I hear ya! Let’s take a trip my friend. Thanks PAR.
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I can make great stuffed shells. Now I’m hungry. lol
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Let me know when your making Stuffed Shells. I’ll bring the desserts! Thanks Fia.
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Tastefully penned, Keith. I’m an Al Dente kinda guy as well. I love pasta and Italian food in general, but then again I really love Mexican food as well. Damn, I’m hungry now. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Appreciate the generous comments.
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This is a very delicious poem, dear Keith!
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Yes! Fly on over to me. We’ll have a huge Italian meal. Or I’ll fly to you and we can meet somewhere in Italy. Thanks my friend! xox
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Read MoreZak's yellow xanthoma was vile.Urine tears, slowly run quietly producing ooze.No money left.Keeping Jesus in his grips,Father Edwards divine cock bastardizing anally.
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Somethings just aren’t right in this world. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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HA! Nothing is right in the world. Enter at your own risk! Thanks man.
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Keith
I loved the way you used the alphabet in reverse to pen this piece.
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Hello Peter. i appreciate the generous comments here. Thanks!
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Letters make nothing of path’s quest.
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Valid point. Thanks PAR.
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian