-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
Neutralized
slip
the knot
fingers prying
desperately
despite…
their tremoruncage
what should
never
have beensome beasts
are born unseen
but they don’t die that waykeep tugging
at the ropessooner…Read More
![Profile Photo]()
![Profile Photo]()
liked this
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
Roack-a-bye, Baby
I know no other way
the weight of his absence presses
aching…waiting…
begging for his return
as nights close in
shadow draping me in yearning
the remembrance nearly blistering
moments of fierce and desperate
thundering of twin beats
throb piercing me
and I cannot…will not…forget
saturation a constant
as…Read More![Profile Photo]()
![Profile Photo]()
![Profile Photo]()
liked this
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
Willow wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreI know no other way the weight of his absence presses aching...waiting... begging for his return as nights close in shadow draping me in yearning the remembrance nearly blistering moments of fierce and desperate thundering of twin beats throb piercing me and I cannot...will not...forget saturation a constant as darkness falls summoning...
9 Comments-
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
Thank you, Fia 😊
-
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
Long distance can be urgent in the extreme. But it’s so worth the wait. Thank you, Brenda 🧡
-
![Profile picture of Honoria]()
Dear W,
Dang girl. This sizzler is well balanced with thoughtful hotness but not vulgarity. You let the reader envision what they want/need with passion and depth of feeling. There are visuals that lead us along while creating emotional ties of love and lust. The best of all balances. Great write. H🌷
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
Hey Honoria
It’s good to see you. Thank you so much 😊
-
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
It totally is worth the wait:)
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
Truth! Thank you, Adelphina 😊
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Willow. The words sizzle in their longing my friend. Excellent write. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
Some days it’s the sizzle that dominates. Thank you, my friend 😊
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Adelphina wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreI've got so many sidesinside and outside using chaos as my guideshowing me the waybecause babyI'm everything all encompassing mixing it uptearing shit upI'll bring my shadesI'll bring my coolI'll bring my teethYou bring the warbecause babyI'm a fucking...
18 Comments-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Damn girl this is edgy. Love it.
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hey Fia! Thanks chica!
I was in my feelzzz. Hahaha
Hey have a great day! -
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Take no prisoners!!! Forget fruits and veggies, bring me pizza and the finest wine!!! ha-ha-ha I’ll expose my kitty from the top of the white house and enjoy every second of it!!! You say stop, use caution? I say gun the motor and rip down the road….lol Grab the apples off the tree of life….I’ll eat every one….She’s ours lads and no one’s left to tell. ha-ha-ha.
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Dude! You made my evening with your comment. Hahaha
I wanted to write something different and edgy and I wanted to cuss. lol
It’s fun to let loose and just go with it and see where it goes.
And hell yeah, take no prisoners! Rrraaarrrrr.Hahaha you are too freaking cool amigo!
Rock on!
-
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello beautiful Adelphina I can feel your fire here lovely lady…you are lovely no matter what light you’re bringing but this is really you ❤️
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hi Crimsin:)
Well thank you. I woke up and had that phrase in my head, Chaos in Color and wanted to
explore what I thought it looked and felt like. Turns out it feels pretty bad ass. HahaI’m so happy you are here on Starsrite. Truly.
You have inspired a lot of my writes on DUP and here.Thanks for stopping by!
-
-
![Profile picture of Styxian]()
Is someone just a little fired up? Kinda crazy we are doing this while watching each other on facetime. LOL. I keep sneaking peeks at ya! I can’t think of anything to say, just things to do!
We are way too goofy. But I love it.
Anyway hotstuff, what a fuego write! I’m in a devouring mood!
April 29th!-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hey big sexy!
Yes, I woke up in a mood! Hahaha
After we got off FaceTime I started this write.You’re so cute in your glasses typing away. Hehehe
And I keep peeking at you too!I can’t wait to be
face to face
flesh to flesh
All that stuff that comes with you and me together in the same space:)
Love ya babe
-
-
![Profile picture of Styxian]()
(I have to tighten up the headboard before you get back. We are killing it! What!)
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hahahaha. Ssshhhh!
-
-
![Profile picture of Titanium K]()
Hell yeah, girl! Get it! 🔥
❤️k-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hi TK!
It’s so awesome to see you on my page!
How have you been!Yes, I was in a mood hahaha
Thanks for your snaps on my write amiga:)
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write with a lot of fire my friend. Amazing flow with a lyrical vibe, makes sense being you’re listening to music. I know I’m not alone now, I write while listening to music as well. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hi Damien!
Nope you are not alone! For me music opens doors in my mind when I’m writing.
It really does. It brings different tones or vibes to my write. Hope that makes sense:)
And please know I appreciate you too!Thanks for stopping by!
-
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
Talk about a cataclysmic write! I bet this was fun to capture! 🙌
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hi Willow.
It was fun. Sometimes when writing it’s also just as important to catch our adrenaline too.
My pulse was pumping with this write. Hahaha
Hope that makes sense!Thanks for stopping by!
-
-
![Profile picture of Honoria]()
Dear A,
Chaos in color. Sounds like my closet and then my brain. But mostly my closet. My brain is largely grey matter. I’m off topic hang on…I’m back- I’m a fucking carnivore too! Shred it sister. I really dug this because it is edgy and it is raw. And it makes me want to ditch convention and just be feisty. Fabulous.
Just fabulous. H 🌷-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Hi H!
I would love to see your closet, I’m intrigued now. Haha
And I have seen your brain!
It’s a beautiful brain- you are an awesome writer- don’t forget that!
You should have a little spice daily chica.
At least one little teaspoon a day, just like honey. It’s good for your soul. Trust me!
I’m so happy to see ya on my page sister!Love ya and miss ya!
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
Heave Silence
words recede
when darkness settles
and sound is heard only at the edges
muffled though they be…
silent sobs and absolute grief
louder in my senses
than gunshots and shouts of jubilation
because we all know where hate takes us
but only some will see it
guess it’s only visible…
from the barrel end of a gun
to…Read More3 Comments-
![Profile picture of NAVINA]()
It sounds like moment of redemption. The darkness seems to have control it all.
It talks about gunshots, shouts of jubilation over hate, and staying “triggered.” It’s that “eye for an eye” energy where the fight never ends because everyone is “just warming up” to hurt each other back.
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
The only way to fight hate is with love and compassion. Standing together in the face of adversity and having each other’s back.
-
![Profile picture of NAVINA]()
Yes exactly… With love always to defeat against the darkness that will not win. Good write keep it up .
-
-
-
- Load More Posts
I feel this hunger and need. I like this.