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Read MoreWhy sit in the shadow When the light is warm and welcomingWhy stay silentWhen the noise is resounding and beckoningWhy be with a fewWhen there is many up for the joiningWhy pick youWhen there are other volunteeringThe whys do not...
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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Hoi hoi
As long as you remember my nameI will always be content with just being.
Ahhhh…., the beauty of simplicity!
The cherry on the cake!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus-
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Thank you, Duhsjaak❣️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! What can I say? This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian ❣️
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The one before the few or the many. Individuals, in the knowing, are complexities. Well worth the read 🌼
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Thank you, Joe ❣️
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The pleasure was mine 🌼
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I don’t need anybody to remember my name, myself. As long as my words reached something in them in recognition. I’m happy to let others have the limelight 😊
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Willow i will remember your words your unforgettable . Thank you ❣️
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Fantastic.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Your words display your humanity and some vulnerability. Yet, there’s also a warm heart behind all that beating.
Beautifully done, Fia.-
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Hi Tim and thank you for the comment.;))
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Thank you, Hamid ❣️
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Thank you, Adira ❤️
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hello lovely Fia a very fiery passion powerful 💕
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Thank you crimsin ❣️
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Oh damn…
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Thank you, Willow❣️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Fia. This write is fire my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian I need to get this fire started somehow. Lol
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I do this to women …
Then they burn for me
Wait
Listen
I may be at your door ….-
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Ohh, waiting.
Big like
Thank you PoetSpeak ❣️
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The flames of that passionate fire are rising high in this one, Fia. Nice one.
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Thank you, Tim had to bring a little fire❣️
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Do you see me leaning in? This poem has made me a voyeur. Very nice, Fia, love it.
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Thank you Kay-1😊
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Read MoreYour inconsistencies are consistentHappy yet state your sadAngry but seem to be gladRelaxed but wound tightWant to be gentle yet you biteNo one understandsNo one took the timeNo one gave a shitAlways left behindWeeping from rageSpilling into the calm...
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
Intriguing…
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Thank you, willow
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![Profile picture of M.E]()
I like the contrast you used in some verses. Dark thoughts indeed. Well done, Fia!
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Thank you, M.E appreciate that
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend, with dark vibes very present. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. was in the zone.
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Thank you, Adira;))
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Fantatic!
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Thank you, Adagio
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![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
G’Mornin’, Fia 🌤️
Good title, and what a great lead-in with V1’s frustrating contradictions setting the mood for what’s to come (L2, make it “you’re” sad).
Boy howdy! You sure know how to express the angst so many of us have had to endure and overcome; yet, it seems some never do … sadly so.You’re such a creative writer, Ria: I admire your keen ability to weave vivid imagery and emotion throughout every verse and in the use of spot-on rhymes, timely line-breaks, and smooth flow.
Excellent wrap-up verse, too. For rhyme’s sake with “despair,” consider using “there” rather than “here” (just a thought).“Wake, wake from this despair! (great poe-esque touch)
It is me you’re talking to …
no one else is there.”Fia, you’re such a joy to read and share with. 🌈
Thank you ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard🖌-
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Thank you so much for the compliment and comment. Richard I appreciate it
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Oh, sure thing, Fia!
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Yes, it has been changed. Ty ;))
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You misunderstood, Fia … I meant to change L4 to “there”. Not L2, which was fine as “despair”.
So “despair” and “there” rhyme.
(like this)
Still, you find me in your dreams
Wake, wake from this despair
It is me you’re talking to
No one else is there.
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Very captivating.
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Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
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Thank you, Steven;))
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hello lovely Fia this is beautiful in its acceptance of this person behind the veil 💕