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Read MoreI never asked to shoulder your weightBut here I amWith every burden I takeYou don’t give a damnYou assume I don't feelBecause you read what I wroteYou assume I am healedYou're wrong. I stand here brokeI strive every day to...
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Thank you Damian ☺️
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There is true and honest pain here, so palpable I can almost touch it.
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Thank you Detritus ☺️
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A powerful piece written with heart blood. An empath can feel what is Hidden behind the words. Vibrations speak louder and clearer than words. Great work Fia!
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Thank you, Sappho, appreciate that:))
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One of the hardest things is trying to help and being pushed away.
Great ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick;))
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So true. I can write it down…to give me release for the moment at hand. But somethings live on forever. You can’t delete it. I wish I could. Oh no! Another thought coming on!!!
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I just wrote Edit My Life after writing my comment.
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Haha you were inspired? cool
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It seems that a lot of times, when I comment on someone’s work, the way I relate turns into my own next submission.
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It happens to me sometimes. I enjoyed it.
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Thanks
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I feel this. The weight of another persons sorrow. A moving piece.
Kind regards
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Thank you, James;))
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Read MoreI was born from two people who did not know what they created A force to be reckoned with, never to be underestimated. As I walk into the room, all eyes are on me. Smooth like iceNot seeing the fire being set free What they don't...
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fucking shit…. I left for a few weeks now you want me dead… ok im leaving
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Don’t you dare leave.
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Um…duly noted. Definitely destruction incarnate
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Thank you, Willow
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This is rather unsettling knowing the devastation that’s so common these days with active shooters. Very scary.
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I did not want you to feel that way. Going with the prompt I created with Ambyr, He picked creation, and I chose to go with devastation. That encompasses Fire, Water, Ice
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No problem. The poem has a lot of weight to it and a lot of fire in its delivery.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a change of pace my friend, you always prove there is no subject you can’t tame. It’s too close to call, you both delivered amazing writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I needed to stretch and get out of comfort zone
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You nailed this one. No doubt about it. The kind of write that pulls you along in an inexorable tide of power and rhyme. I keep envisioning cement shoes while reading 😁
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Haha well that’s interesting. Thank you Detritus
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Read MoreHow to maneuver on the siteTo upload your WorkClick on Write and Publish1 = You will see series, add series chapter number and edit seriesThis is for your stories that have more than one chapter and want to stay...
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You’re welcome, Damian. Thank you
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Excellent breakdown.
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Thank you, Keith ;))
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Very helpful info. Thank you!
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Your welcome, Detritus
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Read MoreI would be telling you a lie if I stated that I did not need a night out with my friends. Work is the usual hectic mess that it is. The peace and serenity I crave at home have...
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hello lovely Fia good evening you are an excellent story teller this is sexy and fun while being thrilling too 💕
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Thank you crimsin. That is so kind of you to say. I hope you like the rest of the story.
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Amazing write, you’re a fantastic storyteller my friend. Dig this, cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you;)) cuz
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very nice. lookin forward to next part.
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Thank you Ambjr;))
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Talk about a steamy build up the suspense here if just strong as can be. And the dialogue flows perfectly like a bunch of ladies on a night out at the bar. And then the guys lining up with drinks for the protagnist is a surpising and original plot line. Fantastic opening.
John
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Thank you ☺️
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Read Morewell I am brokebut that's nothing newI just don't know how to take the insultI care and acknowledge inequitysorry, I am a brown manso I know how it feels to lose a job over skin color I also know...
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To see the world and its inhabitants as they truly are and be able to accept them is being “woke” then I am too. Nice stream of consciousness.
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I will never be ashamed of supporting those who are just trying to live their lives. I mean I feel extra worried for trans people. When you have the vice president calling trans people deranged it’s mind blowing. Scary times.
Thanks for the read, much appreciated.
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Spitting fire, Nick. Into the book it belongs! A very powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I believe you can never lose when you fight with truth.
Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.
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!!!!🙌 So on point, my friend! That’s all I got for words here. You done said it all🙌!!!
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✋ such a great comment. Honestly I’m just happy to see there are people that see the ugliness that is happening.
Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.
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Hell yeah! 💥
Really, it’s gotta be the most lame-ass insult I’ve ever heard. If someone is calling people “woke”, does that mean they’re admitting that they’re asleep..? And… proud of it..? 😆 Geez.Love this write!
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Yeah, it is very stupid. And yet they keep saying it like they’re on to something. Literally they’re saying we shouldn’t think. It’s just as stupid as that movie don’t look up.
Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Could feel these words my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian