Phenomenally penned, Fia. I remembered this once I started reading, excellent collaboration. I’m in your collaboration book. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello beautiful Fia and dearest Me I’ve long had dark fantasies this is brilliantly seductive and deep 💕

I like it….sad but honest.
🙏

A heart-touching write!

OMG… you died…

Powerfully penned, Meg. Pulls at the heartstrings my friend, incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

DEAD CLIMAX….

Macabre ‘n cold, necrophiliac’s art,
bizarre love-making to an unbeating heart.
Mutuality is most that it lacks …
thus, it always ends in a “dead climax.”

See, Megan,
How pervertedly alluring you stimulate my warped poetic senses? Heehee-HEEE!👺😈

From the span of scrumptiously lip-lickingly erotic tales to mournfully sad Free Verse poetry, your fantasy imbued ink never skips a beat.
One might be left wondering what unfathomably deep, magical well you draw your brilliantly imaginative scenarios from … yet, even if I had a deliciously palastable bucketful, I’m not sure I’d know what to do with them.

Of course, your artwork choice and title are sheer perfection in leading us into the atmospheric aura that follows … imagery-gorged, offset lines create continuous interest, assuring every millisecond of attention will be held from one staccato line ’til gobsmacking finalé.

Even in death you deny him the arduous warmth he always craved
Ever, enviously yours! ⁓ Rascal🥂

Thank you so much for that, SeaCat! I appreciate the read!

I know one thing
I wouldn’t be flaccid around you

Unusual vulnerability and I love that

BIG LIKE

Hoi hoi
Maybe because I am unable to write things like this one, I envy people’s ability to make it work. Thanks to the gods there are other ways too.
What a wonderful piece of work is this. Thank you both.
Love it!
Kind regards, Gus

have enjoyed writin with you

Beautifully penned, Fia & Ambjr. You two have chemistry writing together, outstanding write. Appreciate you, both.

Damian

hello you two what a lovely and passionate collab. this is beautiful 💕

A well written piece!
Did you use stream of consciouness, Fia-in-collab-mood? Hehehe

Good job both of you! “)

Great job…..

I always wonder who’s face that is when I look in the mirror… nice collaboration

Brilliantly penned, Fia & Ambjr. Into the book it belongs! It’s not easy for a collaboration to make my book. But this was seamless, incredible collab you two. Appreciate you, both.

Damian

This is such a well blended collaboration. And just real and raw. As good as it gets.

Great job you two.

Powerful work. Tremendous

Brilliant storytelling, Meg. Appreciate you.

Damian

Once again, Megan🎖

Mystery, excitement, hardcore, tender … whatever/whenever perfection in a scenario demands, your pen seems to instinctively command visual diction with the stroke of a master artist’s brush.

You continually assure us of your raconteuric skills on any level in every theme, breathing life into the utmost sensual or deeply erotic scene, to characters’ personalities that take on verisimilitude as though we could reach out and touch them, smell their breath, feel their heat, actually hear the emotional timbre in their voices, and see the colors of their eyes, as their pupils dilate and flex.

Simply, enviously brilliant, Lady-Author … you’re provenly the best!
How very fortunate we are you share! ⁓ Richard🖌

Richard, it’s so wonderful to have you following along with me. Your comments blow my mind. You make me so happy! Sorry for the delay in the next chapter. Hopefully this week.

xoxoxo