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Read MoreI could never play the pianoThere are too many keysAs my fingers touch I tremble feeling ill at ease“Focus you can do this”I tell my soulBut the teachers disheartening eyesGrips me and wont let goWhen she leavesThe tears begin to...
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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I played piano for years but got bored with it being I had no band to play with. Your words here show a timid and shy player developing into a professional with music in their soul. Music moves people. It should be learned by everyone.
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I agree with you. Sometimes when you do not have the right teacher, it would put a person off from even trying to learn to play. Thank you, Tim
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Great write. Emotionally driven. Well done!
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! You know I love writes that involve music my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ☺️
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I always envied people who could play the piano. I had a friend who played classical by memory & it blew my mind. I only ever had voice. Lovely walk through the keys here
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Thank you, Willow ;))
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This is a very unique vibe, Fia. I like it a lot.
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj;))
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The piano is a beautiful instrument. It has the power to move people to joy and tears.
I enjoyed this poem.
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Thank you, Knight;))
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The last line made me smile. Guitar is my instrument, but I know how overwhelming it can be to learn an instrument. Playing one a little might not be too hard, but playing it well is far, far harder. Nice work, my friend.
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Thank you, Sam ;))
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Read MoreIt starts off full and swelling bursting at the seams as if it will engulf the world in its beauty Slowly, ever so slowlyIt begins to disappearAnd shadow creeps in I secretly prayed for it to stay To embrace me in its warmthMy prayers...
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A good write! I loved your moon analogy. “)
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Thank you, Me;))
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When we’re linked to the moon’s tides…it can get overwhelming. I’m a full-on moon child myself, I get it
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Thank you, Willow;))
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I loved how visual this was, but also in a very subtle way. I could see the sort of waxing and waning pattern but at the same time we weren’t talking about a literal moon, so it was a weird kind of take this very visual thing and make it into a feeling. And then it’s all wrapped up in really beautiful language.
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Thank you, Green;))
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The other morning, I was in a very sexual dream. it was intense! And then my alarm went off and scared the absolute hell outta me. Talk about a rip-off!
Your words reminded me of my own misfortune. LOL
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I was looking out the window at the moon and my mind just went with it. Thank you, Styxian ;))
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An excellent metaphorical take, Fia. Love it.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian:))
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The ebb and flow of the man/woman dynamic.
I digs this
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj;))
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Superb work.
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Read MoreTime’s sands, slipping through hands. Halo of fading light, the cold of the depth of nightDark halo as portal to the great below. How One could just Slip Away, lips pressed upon a Dark array of the broken day -Consciousness...
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We have no choice but to be here ..
Poets write sometimes in order to avoid Last Rites
BIG
LIKERead twice
Hit me different second time around as the bartender was calling for last round ..-
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Thank you PS… Much appreciated
#Cheers
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Like PoetSpeak, I read this one twice. It has the feeling of a bell rolling in the mist. That question at the end…if you get an answer, I would like in on the knowledge
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Thank you Willow…
<#3
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Powerfully penned, Cipher. This is a deep write my friend, lots of layers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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‘Light lies
in
bright
eyes. Captured in forward and backward enrapture. The light
of
life. The seeming meaning
in the
dreaming. ‘
A core of words needing a home, thoughts laid, meanings personal yet to share. Takes hold on the second read.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreYou said that you wanted me. It's hard to believe. With your head between her thighs, And you holding her knees. Not once did you glance up, To see that I’m there. With your head held in place, As she’s pulling your hair. You said that you...
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Damn, Fia. Straight up fire on this spill my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Haha, thank you, Damian ;))
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Ick
Now that’s a visual
Uh No
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I’m cracking up. Thank you, Poetspeak;))
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![Profile picture of Paula Jobi]()
Wow! I wonder if I could seize that anger? That is very powerful! I might give an angry piece a try. Mine is usually of the “woe is me” variety. Very powerful!
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I dedicated my first post today to you…
Anger!-
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Omg that is so sweet Paula. Thank you
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hello beautiful Fia this was so beautifully moving my eyes teared 💕