Passionately penned, Fia. Damn, the room got hot. This one is fire my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Sizzling piece Fia. Well written and scorching hot. xo

amazingly penned, a tantalizing, fiery read. that’s sensually engaging.
~ c

Like this sexiness Lady, we agree that a great piece of writing can stir the loins. Tight work

This feels raw and self-aware, especially in how it explores the act of reading as intimacy. There’s a lot of honesty here.

This is some sexy voyeurism you got going on here, Fia
Steamy hot!!

Thanks for the information, Fia. Is that spam right above my comment? Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Great info. Thanks Fia.

Good to know:).
Thanks for being transparent and letting us know what the process is.

You always find yourself when you don’t realize it.
23 sounded like a good year of life for you!

Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write with a very powerful message. Writing is therapy I agree with you completely. No matter how creative I get with a poem or lyrics there is always a therapeutic quality even as simple as getting something off my chest. Very relatable piece lets me know I’m not alone in the world. Appreciate you.

Damian

PG

When the darkness surrounds you and you think of the unthinkable remember this.
You have to be alive to find peace.Death just brings death.
Now you take care and keep writing.

🙏💋🙏

This is powerful and the images and words are delicately constructed. Always move forward PG, never look back. Well written.

Great piece. There’s also a hidden but great message in here. Yes, kick your kids out of the nest. But let them know if pressure builds, if the world becomes to much, the door opens both ways and they’re always welcome. So many people commit the acts that they do, endure the abuse that they do because they have no where’s to return to

Your muse has the answer of your being, so continue to let the words flow and live as you dream…but don’t any wooden nickels, are flying monkeys.

I love this because, the dark is my friend when scribbling. The dark is an embryo in the womb of the mind. Keep on, getting on with your writing.

Atticus Abbey/Adagio

Very well expressed. It is a well-felt plea that we all can relate to. Your version is precise and captures the feelings well.
Now cheer up! 😉

Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. Your plea is so authentic and real, and your reading expresses the emotional element of the words themselves. We all face self-doubt and our vulnerability escapes through our deepest fears sometimes. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is one captivating write. the audio and image give this a wonderful, short story vibe. Well said. Today is Wednesday and your alive…smile.

hello beautiful good evening this is some gorgeous writing and thought I like the idea of your tears watering the lovely seeds inside your inner garden great write ❤️

Fantastic poem and for some reason, I thought of the song, “Save The Last Dance For Me.”

Beautifully penned, PG. Into the book it belongs. A very authentic write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Usha, thanks for reading. xx

When loveliness and sadness combine into one. This poem shines through those teary raindrops. Marvelous piece PG.