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Read MoreI’m not weak. And to be honest, I’m not strong either.. I’m the perfect balance of both; I’d bet that you are neither. Your weakness of the flesh, with your emotions suppressed, drowning in temptation, but oh sweet baby, I’ve not tempted you yet. I’m resistant to...
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Thank you xx
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
The flow is perfect and I the defiance at the end fits this poem so well. I like it.
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Defiance is one of my strong suits. Thank you, dearest Fia. xx
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![Profile picture of Average Joe]()
Well phrased battle of wills 🌼
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I appreciate it. xx
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Great flow and a very smart human, to tight
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I thank you dear. xx
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Great write PG.
Those that yield to temptation fail to see the price they have to pay and often become addicted to choice of drug…. booze,food,gambling ,porn,sex,excersise etc.To yield occasionally is being human…💋
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Absolutely Peter, you get it. The price is too high, and I am too cheap. 😉 Thanks for reading. xx
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I agree with Fia, “defiance” suits this poem well. Not to mention the flow of this piece!
Daniel
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Daniel, thank you. Wasn’t there a saying about defiant girls? Or does my memory fail me? lol xx
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Phenomenal piece. Nicely said and executed!
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Keith, you are always appreciated my dear friend. Thank you for reading. xx
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Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend, I always love the layers in your writes. Always something bubbling underneath the surface. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dearest Damian, I have to keep things exciting. Thank you for reading, it’s always a pleasure. xx
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Read MoreMy skin hurts. It feels like they're ripping it off my bones—sliver by sliver. I can't scream anymore. My voice left me an hour after they started. They said that once it's done, I'll be a changed person. Yeah,...
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling my friend. This is really good. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Sexy & well written. Nice work Fia.
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Thank you Vision 😊
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Powerful work. You bring this to vivid life.
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Read MoreDirt Shaman Of the dust and dirt – Born to: Hurt Ardent hardened Icy winds – Archers of The Arctic. All upon the heart Pulsating in The dark. Whispering flames of The art. Born to be A rocket. From the very Start. Of the Heart. The third eye That doesn’t lie Reading the pentacles of The oracles ***Cipher Poems ***
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hello dearest Cipher beautiful stream of thoughts ❤️
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Always Soul provoking
Much respect
Naaj
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Here is Guillotine bi-trillets
The ring of steel bells. beckons us to hell
The audience ignores the sound
Multiple bodies hit the groundThe chiming goes on, sings a restless song
Unrelenting sorrowful tears
The heart shutters to stop in fearHope is so far gone, whispered please at dawn
Guillotine swinging in the sun
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Gobsmacking good, Fia!
When you can take a form like this one you’ve never even seen before, observe a few easy details – then, with an earnest effort, turn it into such a creatively captivating poetic tale, makingi it seem effortless – now, that’s something to be proud of, because not everyone possesses this level of potential and/or natural…Read More
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Thank you
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You’re ever-so welcome, Fia
My apology: I forgot an edit; V2-L3, (shuttering should be shuddering).
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It’s okay. That took me three tries. Lol
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YEAH, ya killed it!
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Keep on, keepin’ on. It’s great!