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M.E wrote a new post
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Yeah, they have bubble gum ice cream, and it’s gross. Also, have you tried the cotton candy green seedless grapes? My God, they taste just like it. Weird.
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LOL… I thought you were referencing my poem from the beginning. And now, I find out you like strawberry ice cream. OMG. By the way, is this ‘mosquito wing’ phrase an allusion to Smells Like Teen Spirit?
You do realize that you could enter this poem in the ‘coffee’ poem contest don’t you?
You will find this extremely weird, but the imagery in your piece is very reminiscent of the hotel scene early in the movie, Apocalypse Now.
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Lol. I saw your poem after our fellow poet: visions_of_insanity’s recommendation for ice cream. It ended up another type of ice cream. Lol
No. But I liked the reference. I had another poem that I have lost, where I referenced Nirvana’s Smells like teen spirit.
Mosquito’s wings here symbolize inferiority. For their tiny wings comparing with flies. Idk why it came to my mind. But I used it.I didn’t know about the contest. The setting of this poem is in a cafe but the themes has nothing to do with coffee.
I don’t remember this scene. I think I’ll rewatch it one day.
Thank you for reading and for the comments, DK. “)
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Damn mosquito…no chance with all those flies, just keep them off my ice cream cone.
This is so powerful in its imagery…and such a disgusting place…I think I will get my cone to go.j.
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DampKitten wrote a new post
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DampKitten wrote a new post
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Cleverly penned, DK. Can’t go wrong sex and automotive speak. You’ll definitely attract the gear heads with this one. All you need is loud guitars screaming out the speakers. lol. Liked this a lot my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yeah, great flow! It feels like summer, wind playing with your hair and lots of weird thoughts on your mind! Great piece!
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E-mail me a ticket to Mississippi. If the woman look like that image down there, I’m sold! Great write Meg.
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You don’t need a ticket, baby. Just get in your jeep and drive down here. I’ll put on my shortest denims for you…
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I don’t have a jeep! I guess I can steal one and drive out to you. My jeep & I will be quite dirty when I arrive. Do you mind if you give us a sudsy wash down wearing those short denims?
xox
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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You know how much I adore your writing Brenda. This is no exception. Powerful, beautiful, wistful. Marvelous..xo
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Aww, dearest crim, no wonder your mind is a tormented place. That has to be unbearable to face at times even if he is at peace now. 💔 Big hugs!
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. This tugs at my heartstrings my friend. Sending prayers and positive energy your way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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