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Read Morein the meantime pining for youmy darkness grew wearyand said hello, my dear. I am here to keep you companymy sadness swell and I said you can go to hellthe dark answered this won't doNow hush, buttercup, or do...
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thank you graciously dearest Damian for liking this one I liked it too 💕
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Immortal your words will be, Brenda. Lovely write ✍️
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thank you graciously dearest Daniel I appreciate you 💕
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Brenda, you have this talent to bring us into that headspace of hurt and longing. Nicely done
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hello lovely Fia sadly this is kind of true story…I deeply appreciate your thoughts and thank you graciously 💕
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Superb work.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas 💕
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As always Brenda, you’re an amazing, very diverse writer. You could do anything. xo
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thank you graciously dearest Keith 💕
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Powerful write, Brenda. Great read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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Read MoreMy thoughts worry I don't feel good todayMy nerves are on edge, and my soul feels rankledIt's a beautiful sunny day, and I can't get in tuneIt just makes my foul mood stark in comparisonAlcatraz, except my prison is...
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Love this. Trees speak to my spirit as well. A reliable grounding force.
I dug this vibe thru and thru. Thx for posting, Brenda
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hello dearest Naajir thank you for feeling me on this write yes trees with their stoic knowledge calm I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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Powerful and poignant. Tremendous work.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas I appreciate your thoughts 💕
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Nature helps so much more with our issues then medicine or people trying to figure out our problems. I’ll see you in the woods my friend. Love this poem. xo
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thank you graciously dearest Keith I love nature 💕
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Read MoreThis is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...
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I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
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Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
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Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
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Thank you, Brenda
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Tremendous work.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)-
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Thank you, M.E
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Powerfully penned. Brenda. Great dark read. Appreciate you.
Damian