Powerfully penned, Brenda. Always layers in your writes my friend, this one does as well. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

As above, so below. As within, so without. Always you walk in the liminal light of esoteric thoughts. And always a pleasure to read 🌼

Ur on to bigger better things fresh start where did u go y haven’t you called miss ur face friend

Powerful work. Tremendous.

Hello Brenda. Mesmerizing piece of melancholy poetry. I can feel your pain and sadness. Your heart will find happiness with your new surroundings. All in time. xo

Bravo.. Excellent presentation, Fia. Poetry will never die, with so many great writers keeping it alive. Besides, I’m not qualified to do anything else. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

Informative piece. The presentation was done well.

Great video. You have a very pleasant voice! ☺️
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Poetry is like the moon. It never gets old.

Very true! Like all forms of art…it evolves! Painting, music and POETRY! It desires a response. You may try to evoke one feeling and end up being perceived entirely different! You are great. Poetry will never die! Like love it will be in a multitude of forms.

Grandma knew exactly what to do with us. 6 of us & she never lost her temper. Good memories…Thank you, girl

hello beautiful Willow this was a twist I didn’t know where you were going it’s very clever and relateable I had to clean my dad’s grandfather clock when naughty 💕

Brilliantly penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Amazing storytelling my friend, I can relate. Not that I got in trouble a lot, but when I did, not a fun time by any means of the imagination. Excellent work, as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love “old timey” pieces. It brings back the good ol days, even if we didn’t know that they were, then. I would’ve preferred the chair over the usual ass whuppin.
But eh, I survived.
It’s always interesting to me how others lived and dealt with their own upbringings. This was a wonderful story indeed. I raised my kids on “time out” instead of spankings, as your story reflects. It’s a better choice.
Very entertaining write, Willow. Bravo.

It’s good to see YOU here, too.

Well, that was an event, and I think you still did not pass that bulb since you still light up my friend. Enjoyed this piece. Oh, I do not like tomatoed based baked beans either. lol

I enjoyed this from beginning to end. I’d say your grandmother is still keeping an eye on you, my friend. She must know something…

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It hit me that way, while I was writing it. It was a very authentic moment. Appreciate you.

Damian

Some of the best writing you have ever shared with us. Sensational and held my interest. Nice work Damian.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, Damian. I love the simplistic history that makes us all humans deep down, no matter if we try to hide it.
I have very vivid memories of one of my grannies. She was a tiny firecracker. Snap a chicken’s neck and yet tend to our little boo-boos with TLC with the same hand.
Burger Chef rocked!
Wonderfully vivid write, it kept me enthralled.

Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Amazing dark write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The light only blinds and befuddles us, while darkness softly and thoroughly embraces our truth, regardless. There is indeed something special about nothingness -the void- where everything and nothing is possible.

Superb write, my friend!

hello Mary thank you graciously lovely one 💕