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Read MoreThis is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...
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Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
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Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
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Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
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Thank you, Brenda
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Tremendous work.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)-
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Thank you, M.E
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No. She picks them out herself. He does watch. He sits in a corner and envy’s all the men that fuck her. But she don’t care. Mr. Woody can’t even get off without being in excruciating pain. Mr. Woody is more like Mr. Softy. No not the ice cream truck!
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Filled with dark humor and gritty horror. You write this style with imagination and a flair for the dark arts of poetry.
John
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This style comes out very naturally for me. I was always into satire, horror and black comedy as a kid. Thanks John.
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The fucking irony my friend. Cleverly penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. You rock!
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Read MoreHey lady, are you going my way?Hop in, there's nothing more to sayWe'll find a spot underneath the moonSit back and we'll listen to some tunesYou'll experience the universe & starsPlastic Jesus on the dash of my carJupiter, Neptune...
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Let’s go. I’ll take you for a ride.
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You let me know the time & place and we’ll travel anywhere you want to go.
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Visions, I dig this! Reminds me of a 1950s film noir movie. You wrote this with pizzazz. Dig how you made this scene come alive as I read.
John
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Awesome! Yes. Totally 1950’s, early 1960’s vibe I was going for. Maybe some Eddie Cochran playing or Dick Dale. Had fun with this. Thanks John.
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Read MoreJesus had a huge supper, with large amounts of uppersCocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamineThe aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special dayThey offered him food, drink & loads of drugsMost disciples were upset with this...
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If you peed your pants, e-mail them to me. I’ll write a story about it!
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All good my friend. oh ok. Then send me your pants
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this really cracked me up and what is funny is they were talking about the possibility of Moses having psychedelic visions in Exodus because it was ancient belief taking these plants allowed to hear god great write 💕
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Interesting concept you mention Brenda. Thanks so much for the comments. xo
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Read MoreDeath winks at thelilies that smile inthe rain.He takes her.The last dirty trick.Watered drinks andsyphilis doesn't do thepatrons any good.Too much grief forplacebos and madness.Relief must come.Booze and fantasy justbring sickness, andlicking frogs isout of the question.Pipe dreams ease...
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Awesome. Love this piece. The atmosphere of the poem & photo work perfectly together.
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Thank you.
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I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.