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Daniel Long wrote a new post
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Read MoreFrigid, calm front hides in northern winds,vast sky of my bedroom dims. Stream in wintericed over, mother's embraceletting go at bedtime. Still rainfall,sky's dark pillows,eyelids become anchors, smothering. The cold frontblanketing these damp lids,peacefully covers the coming storm.
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
My mother was the opposite of this. Now though, she’s a different person. You have an exquisite way of expressing yourself, Daniel
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Introspective write, Daniel. Very powerful spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I admire the ease with which you express your inner world. Stoic, melancholy, honest and beautiful write. You are there in every word, thank you for the share!
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Okay, that is gut-wrenching. To lay there and live a slow death that you did not sign up for. Not right at all.
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Thanks for the thoughtful comment Fia.
It’s not right and it’s not wrong , it’s just the way it is.Like everything in life,even suffering is impermanent.
🙏
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Quite moving..thank you for sharing
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
I’ve often felt that pain is preferable to apathy. That quiet passing out of space. This haunts & hurts. So often the case, & always hard
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First the Technical: Excellent consistency with meter, beautifully executed rhyme.
Composition: Incredible depth. As Willow noted, the piece reflects a falling away, a loss of touch and intimacy with no explanation. It’s a death of sorts, and you’ve painted it perfectly. Really well done.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreI am on fucking firefrom the top of my head to the bottom of my feetThe fire started from withinBlood drips from every openingSizzling the moment, it hits outer skinI want to cryBut I can notI screamed so loudyou...
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Great write Fia.
I think we’d agree we aren’t our bodies.
Somewhere in the spaces between our cells , our atoms, is our consciousness…but that’s not us either.
We cling to our notion of self but really are non self.Nothing.-
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Thank you, Peter that is a profound statement. I believe we are more.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Phenomenally penned, Fia. This was a powerful write my friend, I think our soul is our mind. It makes sense to me anyways. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That is definitely a thought. Thank you Damian
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The Heart & Soul is everything to a person’s existence. The brain is just there to put it into words. Great piece Fia. xo
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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DampKitten wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe Mississippi Sex Terror rides again.Silver streak Rubiconmud-sling smilelate on the lease. I want a piece.That easy speaking crocodile,inches stretchfor miles at least.Piston pounding beast…Stick shift sentiment up my crease,pumping in the grease. Roll bar rough with a smooth release. How...
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![Profile picture of ReggiePoet]()
This provoked a giggle or two!
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![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
You know, I like to be provocative, Reggie. Thanks for reading!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, DK. Can’t go wrong sex and automotive speak. You’ll definitely attract the gear heads with this one. All you need is loud guitars screaming out the speakers. lol. Liked this a lot my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I wanted to pluck your strings, Damian. Now, give me that acoustic moan…
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Yeah, great flow! It feels like summer, wind playing with your hair and lots of weird thoughts on your mind! Great piece!
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![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
It’s definitely a summer grind, girl. I have super weird thoughts. Thanks so much for reading!
xoxo
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![Profile picture of Daniel Long]()
Haha I loved this Meg! Flow especially. “Ball bearings deep” love it!
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Hey Daniel! I love to hear your favorite lines, ya know. Need a ride?
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Fuck yeah! 😉
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Slide on in
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
E-mail me a ticket to Mississippi. If the woman look like that image down there, I’m sold! Great write Meg.
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You don’t need a ticket, baby. Just get in your jeep and drive down here. I’ll put on my shortest denims for you…
xoxo
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I don’t have a jeep! I guess I can steal one and drive out to you. My jeep & I will be quite dirty when I arrive. Do you mind if you give us a sudsy wash down wearing those short denims?
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I’ll wash you down after I take them off.
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Lemme at your Heme ….
Code for ass deepBIG STICK SHIFT …..LIKE
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Doors are open, Mr. Poet
Keys are in the ignition
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Tongue in your tailpipe…
xoxo
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. You were a great writer then as well my friend. Twenty years ago huh? My high school days seem like a million summers ago. Appreciate you.
Damian