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Read MoreGood morning You look terrible today Smile You look so much better when you smile See, it's improved already Your eyes still look sad What is wrong with you today? Smile with your eyes too There you go Now you look happy Before you go, let's practice "I'm fine"
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Great write, Green. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI could never play the pianoThere are too many keysAs my fingers touch I tremble feeling ill at ease“Focus you can do this”I tell my soulBut the teachers disheartening eyesGrips me and wont let goWhen she leavesThe tears begin to...
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hello beautiful Fia this was so beautifully moving my eyes teared 💕
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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I played piano for years but got bored with it being I had no band to play with. Your words here show a timid and shy player developing into a professional with music in their soul. Music moves people. It should be learned by everyone.
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I agree with you. Sometimes when you do not have the right teacher, it would put a person off from even trying to learn to play. Thank you, Tim
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Great write. Emotionally driven. Well done!
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! You know I love writes that involve music my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ☺️
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I always envied people who could play the piano. I had a friend who played classical by memory & it blew my mind. I only ever had voice. Lovely walk through the keys here
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Thank you, Willow ;))
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This is a very unique vibe, Fia. I like it a lot.
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj;))
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The piano is a beautiful instrument. It has the power to move people to joy and tears.
I enjoyed this poem.
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Thank you, Knight;))
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The last line made me smile. Guitar is my instrument, but I know how overwhelming it can be to learn an instrument. Playing one a little might not be too hard, but playing it well is far, far harder. Nice work, my friend.
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Thank you, Sam ;))
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Read Moresadness day I often cry insidebeautiful understanding it is neededto know happinessugly thinking utopiaif it exisits I don't want to go therewhat a strange existence, so very blandrollercoast life with its twists and turnsup and downs thrills mecorrupt a...
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Fantastic!
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hello dearest Adagio thank you graciously have a great afternoon 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I appreciate you deeply 💕
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A gorgeous piece. You’re a talent Brenda!! xxxxo
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hello dearest Keith good evening thank you graciously for the love it’s felt 💕
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Read MoreI didn't know it was coming This storm The Lightning The fear Of waking up to crashes Like the whole world is falling apart I'd like you to save me But I'd also like To just not have to...
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hello beautiful Green I feel this deeply you are never alone the creator himself sings over you while helping you on your way 💕
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Read MoreBits and piecesSomething thereCoherent thoughtsBut prone to tearSchizophrenic?slightly soThese words can fight,resisting flowWhat once definednow floats awayNo longer focusedMind, astray
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The pen will let you know when it wants to say something….
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Hoi hoi
A real block is horrible.
And I don’t contradict Peter.It is, in my opinion, far more complex. It could very well be that the waiting caused the block. One of the serious causes could be an overdose of possibilities. And maybe I can help there.
In ‘songwriters in the kitchen’, I’ve run a longer series of focus. I know someone whose repertoire consists of 2/5 of music and writes, originating there.
The forum Titaniced, alas.If you want to talk about it, please PM.
It would be a pity if your work would be nipped in the bud.
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I don’t get anything anymore. I start to write and as long as I make it short I can let it sit there a while and come back to it later. But even then, I feel like I’m empty.
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Ideas come to me when I have no pen/paper around. Cool poem!
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Hello Green. This is magnificent!! Well said.