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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Complicated
When the night is still young
The moon has not fully come out to chase the sun away
My heartbeat begins a new rhythm
Smell of honey and cream in the air
Slow music played in the heat of seduction
Tonight I am prepared to treat you a cherished jewel
Not anyone will receive this
Your not just anyone and you know…Read More
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Read MoreWhen the night is still young The moon has not fully come out to chase the sun away My heartbeat begins a new rhythm Smell of honey and cream in the air Slow music played in the heat of seduction Tonight I am prepared...
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Thank you, Crimsin;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with lots of depth my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Great piece Fia. Nicely said.
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Thank you Vision;))
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Complicated is the perfect word, I think
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Thank you Willow. Sometimes you want simple but…complications
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Read MoreWhere do they go,the things that diethe plants, the pets, the things that fly?Where do we go,we humans that dieheaven or hell, or was that a lie?Where does it gowhen the physical crumbles?Back into earth, without even a stumble.The...
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I wondered that from time to time. Especially for those who die you and needlessly. This is a good poem Peter.
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I hope for instance a kitten who didn’t make it due to bad health gets another chance at life that’s what I believe happens great write ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write with lots of depth my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I have a lot of thoughts on this too. I think the answer is complicated and subject to belief and circumstances
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I like this stanza “I’m cautious in my approach, with proper reverence given to the forces greater than I” I enjoyed this Crimsin
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hello lovely Fia thank you graciously I wasn’t sure how this would be received sometimes I get way out there lol ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A beautiful write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously my friend ❤️
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That is spooky Daniel.;)_
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I have seen my grandmother in my dreams. To see in real it’s scary. I liked the line to reign better than serve.
My grandmother she is in her 87 yrs and constantly when I cry she says don’t cry for past your life is ahead go live.
Now I still cry but my tears heavy they roll in my eyes falling drop by drop
Jessy Jacob ❤️
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wow lovely one this write really made feel this is deep ❤️