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Read MoreWillard never had a friendChoked by silver spoonsConstantly picked on by miscreantsDriven closer to the edgeTransfixed aggression'sHell bent on revengeTaught to murder by commandLord of the Rats Sinister rodents, Welcome Big BenInfested abode, Hideous VerminChew thru the door,Gnaw on their...
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I remember watching this when I was younger. The 2003 version!
Left an impression!Great write!
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Never seen the remake. Watch the original when you have time. It’s a creepy, eerie film with some great visuals. Thanks for the feedback Adelphina.
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Michael Jackson wrote a hit song about Ben as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That he did Damian. Thanks!
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Read MoreWitness the Satanists'Blood, Sex MagicCurse of the witches hex,Sealing your doomWorship the sacred chant,Knife into fleshVirginal sacrifice under full moon You cannot escapeRace with the DevilTry to runawayRace with the DevilYou have sealed your fateRace with the Devil You have been...
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Something wicked this way comes. That is an iconic line. Nice poem, I like it
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Thank you Fia. Appreciate it.
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hello dearest Keith I love your style and flow ❤️
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Thanks you my friend. xox
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Exciting things occur when the lights go out. Thank you VUW.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend, has a lyrical flow to it. Loretta Swit from “Mash”? Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yup, The Loretta Swit from Mash. Thanks my friend.
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Read MoreFrom the poet's ink it begins to rise- not a moon, but a cyclops eye, bleaching the green from the leaf.And then,there are no longer trees.Just a hunched back embryo,waiting for Genesis- leaching the warmth from the stone.Grinding a...
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Read MoreYou take thesmall pleasures whenthey come,like vanishing gnats.The black cat rolls onthe freshly vacuumedcarpet,reaching every spotand fiber, to satisfythe deep need for relief.My good friend died thismorning.Cirrohis--his lover became a killer.Motherfucker, I'm sick ofdeath.Neon orange sadness.Three beautiful orphans behind.The...
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One hell of a write.
Go back to bed and rest.
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Thank you.
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Haunting piece of poetry Thomas. Dark and claustrophobic. Wonderfully executed!
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Thanks, my friend.
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my condolences a very well written piece this pulls at my heart my son was 37 when he died that way leaving a family behind great write ❤️
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Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is an excellent write my friend. I relate to this one. Sorry about your friend, that sucks. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you
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Ouch’ I’m guessing we all get duff days .. but this one takes some beating .. My sincere condolences Thomas .. just be sjure to write on brother .. Neville
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thanks, my friend
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Read MoreThe smell of tar was thicker now, a bitter perfume that was becoming his final memory. Shane DuBois wondered if she would miss him. The dame with the eyes like a two-way mirror and a story that had more...
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I will throw in a daisy for you. The next time I write. Thank you kindly my friend.