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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Read Moremorose feelings entertainmy sexuality tied to darknessstunningly beautiful, captivating my soulseducing my flesh, lust flashes and I cavea seduction of spiritquietly amusing me, while my thoughts are abusedin the thick of things I moantasting the aether and the need...
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hello dearest Jim good evening thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Very haunting and pure shaking.
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hello dearest Adagio good morning thank you graciously ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undercurrents my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
This is my Free verse
Do you hear the sun?
As the rays beat down on the ground,
It is subtle but poignant
It’s purpose is to burn.
The exquisite heat,
does not match the coolness in your eyesDo you smell the wind?
Multicolored in its complexity
Surrounds you,
Invades your very core.
It gives you life.
Then withdraws to take your b…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Beautifully imagined, Fia, an excellent effort!
Deserves a VERY strong title!ISSUES TO CONSIDER:
1. Unnecessarily Capitalizing every line, which tends to confuse when one complete line, thought, etc; begins or ends, effectively stumbling the flow, attention, and overall magical smoothness of a poem’s captive spell.
2. Poetic voice … how a poe…Read More-
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I’ll work on it. Thanks for the guidance
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You make sharing a distinct pleasure. 🙏
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Atticus Abbey wrote a new post
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Read More𝒜 𝓂𝑒𝓂𝑜𝓇𝓎 𝑜𝒻 𝒜𝓊𝓉𝓊𝓂𝓃'𝓈 𝓂𝒾𝓈𝓉 𝓌𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝓌𝒽𝒾𝓈𝓅𝑒𝓇 𝑜𝒻 𝒻𝑒𝓇𝓂𝑒𝓃𝓉𝒶𝓉𝒾𝑜𝓃 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝓈𝒸𝑒𝓃𝓉 𝑜𝒻 𝓈𝒶𝓀𝑒'𝓈 𝒷𝓇𝑒𝒶𝓉𝒽𝒷𝑒𝒻𝑜𝓇𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝒻𝒾𝓇𝓈𝓉 𝓀𝒾𝓈𝓈
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very beautiful dearest Adagio ❤️
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Thank you, Brenda.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good evening dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate you very much ❤️
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All-out effort as always! Never cease to impress!
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hello dearest Daniel thank you graciously have a good day today ❤️
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Daniel Long wrote a new post
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Read MoreI shall not forget the moment the light died. The glow of the candle pinched. The stout wick breathes out a fluttering string in defiance of death. But it was time to die. It was time to breathe to death. What do we all think, When...
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hello dearest Daniel darkly brilliant write observing your thoughts on death ❤️
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