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Tastefully penned, Keith. I’m an Al Dente kinda guy as well. I love pasta and Italian food in general, but then again I really love Mexican food as well. Damn, I’m hungry now. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Somethings just aren’t right in this world. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Keith
I loved the way you used the alphabet in reverse to pen this piece.
Clever and worthy of a gold ⭐⭐⭐⭐ -
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Hoi @Damian,
Inspired on the artwork and your write:
een derde mond – plotseling
smaakte wat naar whiskey
tribal tattoo op haar dij
‘s intimite as can bewhiskey is geen verleiding
mijn teken van gevaar
‘t is anders als ik er af blijf
en alleen proef bij haarAnd translated:
a third mouth – suddenly
tasted a bit like whiskey
tribal tattoo on her thigh
‘s intimate as can bewhiskey is not a temptation
my sign of danger
it’s different if I stay away from it
and only taste it on herYours is a lovely write and this is meant as a hats off to that. And you.
Kind regards, Gus
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Hoi hoi A.,
There’s a theory that says that the first four sentences determine, if the reader wants to go on reading.
And the four of this poem take me by storm.Never knew that there is a tong exactly the same as the Dutch Tong. Pronunciation the same as in Dutch too.
Ah well. Love the poem needless to say.
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