Lisa – Stars Rite

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September 20, 2025

Construction Zone pleased to meet you but I already forgot your name my heart has not forgotten you and the massive surgery done to its feelings a transplant has brought new love so, you may move on like a patient done with rehab I will remember your name...

10 Comments

Damian DeadLove
10 months ago

Powerfully penned. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Jacob erin-cilberto
  10 months ago
  
  Thank you for yur kind comment, Damian.
  j.
Fia Naturie
10 months ago

“I already forgotten your name. my heart has not forgotten you.” That is an Aww line. Nice
- Jacob erin-cilberto
  10 months ago
  
  thank you for the kind comment, Fia.
  Encouraging site this is.
  j.
emmagreen
10 months ago

I don’t know but I do know how you’ve always managed to make me want to eat your words so I could digest a few and muchly increase my own writing!! I know: tis an impossibility. Unless a small bribe would help!
- Jacob erin-cilberto
  10 months ago
  
  I would take the bribe, em. But you don’t need to do that…your vocabulary tops mine any day…and when I read your poetry, I want to hide mine.
  Thank you for the kind comment, nevertheless….ha, “nevertheless,” what an odd word.
  j.
emmagreen
10 months ago

Laughing because I’ve oft wondered about that word or – is it a perversion!

By the way, we’re not going to argue about who’s the best, sir.. I, a mere woman, wouldn’t dare! More than probably.. .. .. ..
- Jacob erin-cilberto
  10 months ago
  
  Nope we are NOT going to argue….I have stated my theory.
Thomas W. Case
10 months ago

Fantastic work. Great to see you here, my friend.
- Jacob erin-cilberto
  10 months ago
  
  Thanks Thomas.
  
  j.

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