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    HEAVEN'S SOULS OF 9-11

    The sky, a brilliant and unblemished blue, September's morning, a world fresh and new. No hint of shadow, no whisper of dread, As towers of commerce stood tall overhead. In bustling streets, the city awoke, To the rhythm of life, a hopeful stroke. Then silence...

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    • Nice work Navina.

      It was a dreadful act but so was the response.America has changed much since then and not for the better.

      I hope one day the good American,the kind American,the compassionate American,the generous, welcoming American will triumph over the greedy, selfish egomaniacs that currently run the show…..but I doubt it.
      🙏

    • I remember the day well. I lost two friends in it, both fireman. Everyone knew someone who died and many lost their faith that day. This is an excellently written poem.

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    The Leather Apron

    In the slums of East London's streetsAn unsolved mystery, a puzzle incompleteA murder spree of blood and painMutilated abdomens, a madman insaneFrom the dark shadows an evil lurksA sinister man with perversive quirksAnd a cunning tongue, he's a smooth...

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    • This gave me a Sweeney Todd vibe. This is good

    • I did some research on jack the ripper..never knew his other nickname was leather apron..thanks for comment

    • Me neither..the power of research

    • But def in a funk..haven’t had time to write..

    • “The jewes are the people that will not be blamed for nothing.” There was a lot of prejudice against jews in Whitechapel and the entire east end in 1888. I knew what this was about as soon as I saw the title. He left a leather apron behind after one of the killings. Possible Annie Chapman, not sure. Mary Kelly got it the worst, he had plenty of time with her. Excellent poem with great rhymes . I’m glad I read this.

    • Thanks for commenting..I’m glad you stumbled across it..and seems like you have a lot of knowledge about the history of this..I actually want to dive deeper and learn more..I never knew all this stuff..and how many victims there were..

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    in the dark depths I see your face contorted with ragea coldness confinded by a veneera smile to inviteeyes that implorebut I sense you're on the edgeevoking emotions then walking into the shadowsit's your motion that warns mecalculating your...

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    The Moon on Her Dress

    The moon on her dress corruscates my fingers with cobalt shards of icebergs, rolling fingerprints beyond fabric   Tidal hair breaches the  breakers down her back, the last waterfall on earth weeps for every desire lost at sea   Catching the pearls of her eyes in trawls of my dilated bleeding, if...

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    • You make me think…
      It’s cool, I’m good at it!
      I enjoy the complexity of your writes. The vocabulary. The nuanced messages. Even, a word I never knew until you shared it.
      So thank you for the enhanced ability of your writes. It makes me stronger by reading them. And enjoying them.

      • As always, you are too kind Mark. I don’t miss many from DU, but you are definitely on the missed list.

    • This truly shows your intelligence and talent. Very supernacular.

    • I agree with previous commentors on the talent.
      I like the analogies presented in this write.
      Especially fond of the last stanza…reading this makes me feel like I saw her memories
      just before they entombed her under the cathedral floor.

      j.

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