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Hey Crimsin, yes I am. And yes, I have read you.
I believe I also had maybe one or more of your works on my reading list from way back in the day. I fell off the reading wagon somewhere along the line and just limited myself to expressing.
Sorry to hear about your tribulations. If it is any solace, physics just (back in 2022) proved that our universe is not locally real, it’s all a generative simulation of our experiences taking shape. Even the hell we feel, believe it or not, is all self inflicted. Either from the present, our past, or our previous iteration (past life). And strangely enough through vipassana (my first course on April 8th) I realised that if I simply observe all my sensations, good or bad — without judging them, without craving or being averse to them, — they all disappear. We’ve learned to live with ignorance of the truth, ‘all things are impermanent’, even the hell we go through. If you get the chance to, I highly recommend experiencing vipassana for yourself for the 10 day course. Even if you never practice it in daily life after.As for this poem, the person I wrote this for doesn’t feel any intimacy towards me. haha
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This rings so true. It’s crazy how we talk to ourselves when we are going through heartbreak. But when I read this kind of work, I feel grateful for the read and understanding of someone else’s pain. Being able to write it down so eloquently and honestly isn’t easy. Great write.
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Thank you so much for stopping by. I remember your name from DUP as well.
Well, the feelings were true and the clarity you gain from being completely honest with yourself is unparalleled.
I’ve tried to pen that as neatly as I could.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Not the right time
I wandered into this strange land
The beauty I have discovered
With no one to hold my hand
Only a bag and cloak to coverI did not expect to find
A place to call my own
I moved space and time
Wanting to find a homeThen I met you
My world became so small
All my world views
Mean nothing to me at allIf I…Read More
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so much longing beautiful Fia I feel you deeply ❤️makes me sad but I understand this…
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Thank you Crimsin. Life is funny this way;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. Your words have a longing to them that gives this poem it’s wind. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Hi
The line i guess I can’t miss something that never occurred. Nice thankful note to someone who loved you and cared for you losing everything.
I have seen one movie veer zhara of India and Pakistan lovers who couldn’t meet for years and they didn’t say like you said they adored each other and lived for each other.
For a person like you it seems you don’t need love or neither the person you just fulfil dam your desire and finish it off.
For a person like me lost hope on love andman thinking person like you who doesn’t dares and cowardly fears of few hounds that cheat for money
Atleast I gave you hope and to many when you sincerely love do it sincerely else you like a flower crushed by people evil desire that evil dead cant hurt you.Jessy Jacob ❤️
I know you will get hurt but I cant ignore for few people who love sincerely and made their life heaven loving each other. My son must also not lose hope on someone he loves. -
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Sorry fia, my head has become few hounds trash throwing whatever they want and provoking me against me to get into trap. What can I say i believed one man till now now he lost interest in achieving his love which is true. He thinks he is not anymore good.
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I am open to get blocked or delete my account i am not going to ask your pardon. This site seems suicidal home that inspires people to die instead of living seeing few hounds crap. I am not liking it anymore.
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This poem is of love. There are those who love and just cannot be together. Whether it be due to distance or obligations. Not all obligations are nefarious. It could be due to taking care of their families due to being the only on to provide because of an illness.
I do not understand your hounds. I write what comes to mind and I do not expect everyone to like it. It is just my thoughts.
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Very well written 👏
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Thank you Liz;))
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You know this kinda makes me think if Mark and I decided to just be pen pals.
All the missed kisses and keeping it safe. I didn’t take this as a death or suicide?
Sometimes we bury how we feel too because we don’t want to wreck our fantasies.
What if it gets ruined and it ends before it even begins!-
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Thank you Adel. That’s what I was hoping people see. Sometimes It’s just not the right time 🩷
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hello dearest Thriteen you’re from the underground I must know you… this is powerful I don’t know if you ever read me…my memory isn’t good and the last year I was going through hell…this write is full of passion and anyone would love to be wanted this way ❤️