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Read MoreHe had seen on TVAn execution by hangingCurious he was, he triedHow it is to hangExecution means dyingHanging is not a gameExecution means dyingHe won't do it againIt was just a funny gameThis caused his own death
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Thank you my friend.
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Yes, hanging is not a game at all. It is quite uncomfortable in fact. Interesting write.
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Very uncomfortable. Thanks for the read & comment Detritus.
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A thought provoking poem, dear Keith! The curiosity of young people is needed to explore and understand this world. But sometimes we underestimate the fact that children often don’t think about possible consequences of their actions, while they are engaged in making new experiences. Meaningful and important work, my friend!
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Oh so true Elke. Your words and feedback is always appreciated. xo
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Wham. You nailed it.
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Thanks Thomas. Appreciate it.
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Read MoreAs the white doves fly to freedomMy soul is captured with youTo die of coldness and violenceWhy do I let it happen to me? I hate you for loving me; I hate you for obsessing me Controlling my thoughts by your...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciated Damian.
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This is a powerful, deeply moving piece, my friend! Too many people confuse the claim to possess somebody with love. Love blooms only in freedom and mutual respect! Especially the sentence ‘I hate you for loving mé’ cuts like a knife.
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Hello Elke. Thanks for the read and wonderful comment.
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Read MoreBeautiful safety devicesDuring a heavy car crashAt a busy intersectionThey acted like an airbag Thanks to her silicone breastsFake boobs for safety on boardImplants protected her organsFake boobs for safety on board40DD was enhanced enoughFake boobs for safety on boardArtificial...
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Phenomenally penned, Keith. Clever write my friend. They might also work as flotation devices as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool. Glad you enjoyed this poem. Thanks!
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Short and to the point my friend. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreLest We Should Ever Forget The low cloud formation was spectacular to state the obvious and to say the very least .. It seemed like a well-rehearsed salute or celebration in honour of their sacrifice .. The entire scene was played out by three young wounded Tommies...
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I wish so many in my country weren’t so eager to bury history and relive it. Those 2 minutes of silent respect are a beautiful gift for the memory that shouldn’t be laid to rest
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Many thanks Willow I am so glad you stopped by .. Kindest regards, Neville 💜
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We wear the poppies but the message has been forgotten, and reinterpreted, with sinister overtones. War is hell, but it goes on.
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Thank you for checking in .. War has never been fun, has it .. 💜
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Few lines but it is a little gem here, a little masterpiece… You couldn’t say it better, specially the opening, when nature is participating in it, to proof it is the Truth. Bravo ✨my very dear friend YOU😎🌻
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Just between us, thanking You has become one of my most favourite reflexes G Girl .. Neville 💛🌻💜⭐👍
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Top secret between us 🤝🤐
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..💕💛⭐🌻💛💕👍
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Powerfully penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend, this has layers and I love layers. Such a powerful message. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian .. Neville 😎👍
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Brilliant work.
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Cheers mate .. I hope you have already guessed .. I’m back .. Neville
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“Carved from sheet metal / and painted in matt black” is a striking detail. It grounds the tribute without sentimentality.
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Now ya just spoiling me .. Cheers again my friend .. Neville
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Powerfully penned, Keith. There are dangers everywhere, clever write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian