Wonderful write. It has a calming effect, even.
Not enough honest, heart felt writes are done by men. It’s good to see you’re brave enough to pick up that torch. You did so well.

This is calming. Nicely done

Thanks for reading and listening.
I wrote this ten years ago. I tried to make it into a song. I am very glad enjoyed it.
Regards James

Thank you for sharing this. A very direct and insightful poem, I really appreciate the “whipping” euphemism for rent. Hit the nail on the head!

Over pay is right. You exemplify that very well in this piece.
Cheers- Brad

Oh my goodness, I really like how intense that reading is. I agree that the rent is too high

hello dearest James I know the feeling this is wonderful I feel the pain of it ❤️

I have a close friend who lives near London and she keeps me posted on the shite that is going on over there with the new regime…kind of like what is happening here.
I still love this country, but feel like it is being taken away from us with greed for power.
j.

Fly the Union flag high and the cross of St George. We must be the only country in the world that allows every other flag to be flown yet we are made to feel ashamed of our own. Very topical piece says this patriotic poet.

Chris

I’m with Christine Shaw (Chris) to the letter .. there’s shite everywhere but don’t believe everything you hear these days it’s hard to differentiate between so called artificial intelligence and the twisted minds of those who just like stirring up trouble .. There are also a lot of dimwits that believe everything they are currently being force fed through fear of being singled out and sadly made an example of ..

Thanks. I have a new recording and an evolving song. Check new link above.

The UK is insane most of the time.

Regards James

We seem to share a similar view on that score .. Take care .. Neville

Thanks. Its real. Thats all anyone can ask. If you play or sing you have to give it everything.
Regards