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Liziantus-Marantus started the topic Poetry in the forum General chit-chat
How long have you guys been writing poetry for? From what age? And what inspired you?
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Read MoreYour rocket flew.And the dark space around you anew.Everywhere around you,bright shiny stars. Real,not locked up behind bars.It's like they twinkled in the dark sky.With shiny,bright moonlight. Are you glowing,dark starlight?As you flew and explore.You felt sad no more. For the view...
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Read MoreI don't need whipped cream or frosting to make me sweet.Neither on my cookies.Or to make my life sweet.It's too much sugar for me.A prince charming just isn't the one I need.I want a gingerbread man,the one I'll feed.A...
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This Gingerbread man is sweet and sour. I love it yet it makes me sad for a bit. And a glimpse of hope. A glimpse of hope doesn’t hurt.
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I’ve always found gingerbread to be more spicy than other cookies. I’m not about the super sweet myself. I need the pice. Loved this!
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Very creative. Excellent work.
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Phenomenally penned, Liz. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreA month ago,I met this man.A guy,I call a fictional man.I want him,for he is not real. He's on paper,but love is what I feel.This year has been really rough.And life has been really tough. I guess I used it to...
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I could relate to this poem. It’s not “stupid”. We all fall for “fictional” men and women.
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I love the way you use repetition in this piece, and the rhyme is really nice. I like the message. Fictional men have no faults, so they are easy to fall for. It reminds me of an old song called Imaginary Lover by Atlanta Rhythm Section.
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Brilliantly penned, my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreShe told me she loved me by the water fountain.It's where we met.Where we dreamt,where our home was.And where we slept.She told me she loved me more than him.Her voice sounding sad and grim.It's been a good while since...
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Also,inspired off Alec Benjamin’s single, “”Water Fountain”.
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Beautifully penned. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Beautifully penned, Liz. Fantastic flow my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian