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Read MoreShe’s growing fingernails! Look at her tiny hands! She’s holding up her own bottle! She’s learned to wave! She is brilliant at handwriting. She keeps doodling on her hands. She isn’t great with using her fingers to count. She can tie her shoelaces! She’s huddled up in...
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Agree with Fia entirely.
10 out of 10
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Quite vivid, it’s captivating the reader.
I’m admiring the character at play.
Wonderful and disturbing at the same time.
A sensual piece. x
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Read MoreI slide the knife down my chestand tear myself apartI see an unborn fetusanother version of myselffull of innocence and no doubtsI see them content and peacefula version of myself who is okaywith the reflection that stares backA version...
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I think you capture the feeling of it in this poem. Nice
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Seems like there’s always a version of ourselves that was diverted off the path by life circumstances or choices. This is a good visual of that self-exploration
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Read MoreThere’s a buzzing in my ear which screams at me to do something. Be something! Create something! Sing something! Eat something! There’s a banging in my ear which tells me to wish for something. Wish for friendship! Wish for love! Wish for your magnus opus! Wish for courage! There’s a humming...
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This is “super.”
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Hoi hoi @Sunny,
I’m not a Native speaker, so I’ll come back tomorrow for a full eye full of beauty!
I’ll be giving myself time to digest.
See you then!
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This is good. It feels like your words are tumbling from your mind without stopping.
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Thank you so much, Fia! My intention was to express a hyperactive mind which follows alongside the youth. ^^
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I really like this.
If everyone just sits and listens, eventually they will hear a sound beneath all sound.It is a gentle ringing in the ears,not tinutus.Its the sound of silence,the sound of the universe, maybe even the sound of God.
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Beautifully penned, Sunny. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dear S,
The frenetic energy of doing, getting, being, all at an unreasonable tempo is prevalent in this write. It made me think if only we did things at a slower pace to realize all the aspects of life’s lessons. Alas, all but a pipe dream. Terrific write.
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Thank you for the review, H! I agree– If we stop to take a look around once in a while, we can truly embrace all what life has to offer, but we are constantly attempting to race against time itself. A slow life is a nice life, a fast life is an exciting one. A mixture of both is wondrous!
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This said a lot without it blatantly saying it. It breaks my heart.