This said a lot without it blatantly saying it. It breaks my heart.

Agree with Fia entirely.

10 out of 10

🙏

Quite vivid, it’s captivating the reader.

I’m admiring the character at play.

Wonderful and disturbing at the same time.

A sensual piece. x

I think you capture the feeling of it in this poem. Nice

Seems like there’s always a version of ourselves that was diverted off the path by life circumstances or choices. This is a good visual of that self-exploration

This is “super.”

Hoi hoi @Sunny,
I’m not a Native speaker, so I’ll come back tomorrow for a full eye full of beauty!
I’ll be giving myself time to digest.
See you then!
Kind regards, Gus

This is good. It feels like your words are tumbling from your mind without stopping.

I really like this.

If everyone just sits and listens, eventually they will hear a sound beneath all sound.It is a gentle ringing in the ears,not tinutus.Its the sound of silence,the sound of the universe, maybe even the sound of God.
Once you hear it you can’t unhear…..just don’t fear it.

Beautifully penned, Sunny. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you for the review, H! I agree– If we stop to take a look around once in a while, we can truly embrace all what life has to offer, but we are constantly attempting to race against time itself. A slow life is a nice life, a fast life is an exciting one. A mixture of both is wondrous!