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Read MoreI added flocculant to my pool. It clumps fine unwanted dirt particles together creating a floc for easier removal making cloudy water clear again. How pleasant to be in some water that's clear. I wish there was a flocculant for the human mind that could bind unwanted...
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Read MoreIt is I again. I guess I should have explained something about myself, I don’t know if I ever addressed this, I hate fucking politics. I write about them sure, but I don’t love anything about the...
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The two line summary actually hooked me into reading this Damian. Your command of words and imagery shows you are a masterful writer. Bravo! I’m going to have to read the rest of the chapters!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Daniel. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. Yeah, the summary is lyrics from a song I penned. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian this went to the bone! Thank you for sharing this. Let the ink pour.
Bat
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the story, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian this is strong tonic and a grand read. Love how you wrote this with such great clarity like a beat writer for our modern age. My younger sister is a Trumpie and I have heard those conspiracy theories she believes about how Trump supposedly is being targeted politically but is innocent. No concern for the constitution of democracy. But you wrote your feelings with gusto and power. Great read my friend.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I hear you, I just don’t see how so many can’t see it, or choose not to see it. And some are the worst of the worst and actually go along with it. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreHe workedHe workedHe workedand worked He drankHe drankHe drankand drank His job wasn't to far from his homeHe would walk home the same route every dayIt wasn't the greatest neighborhoodHobo's were always near the liquor store he would stop by each...
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You told the story of this man with great power and a really strong and surprising ending. You clearly know the art of poetic story telling well.
John
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Hello John. Thank you so much for the read & the kind words. Appreciated.
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And the moral of the story is…..wait till your sober before going home.
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HA! Thanks Adira.
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Oh so true sire. Thanks!!
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Read MoreShe was the woman with no nameShe came in when they were leaving their offices to go home for the daySome of the staff tried to be polite and say hello in passingShe never said a word backShe would...
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You painted this picture like a scene on television. I like this.
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Thank you Fia. Appreciated!!
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You have a sensitivity and caring for this character that really must come from your compassionate soul. Loved this portrait you painted in verse.
John
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Hello John You’re comments inspire. Thanks a bunch!!
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Hello Adira. Thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate you!!!
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Read More"Tie me off sweetheart", she said. Sure honey sweetie baby, I love to watch you vomit Don't get any on my shoes Oh fuck it, I'm so in love with you I even love your puke You have the...
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Thank you HJ Furl. Appreciated!
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You paint these people with unflinching description that really makes me feel for them. And there is a slightly humorous tone here which I like. Really find scenes you paint of the underworld of our cities. Love reading your poetry tonight.
John
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Correct. I’m quite satirical with my poems. Thank you very much John.
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DARK AND FEROCIOUS.
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.
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Appreciate that Thomas. Thanks!!
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