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Read MoreI tried to feel somethingI loved her & she loved meI don't know what happenedEverything was going wellThen all of a sudden, I got cold like there was a stranger next to meI tried to get rid of the...
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Thanks!
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That one took a turn. Great write, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate it. Thanks
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Thank you
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Best part: “I got cold like there was a stranger next to me…” thanks for the great read!
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Thank you Daniel. I appreciate you.
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Visions, this packed a mighty punch. You wrote your emotions out with the dexterity of a poet who can really make his feelings known with no room for doubt. Well done.
John
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Hello John. This was based on an old relationship I had. Similar thoughts and emotions ran through me at that time. Thanks my friend.
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Read MoreAfter a night of some intense bowling, I saw this awesome pair of bowling shoes near the counter. They weren't black and red. They were yellow & blue. Plus, they were my size. The colors looked great! I decided...
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Green & yellow…wonder what’s special about that combo. Dreams can be such a trip. Happy bowling!
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Not sure. As long as this dream doesn’t become a reality, I’m good. Thanks Willow.
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Maybe one day we’ll go together. Thanks Adira.
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Visions, there is not a dull moment in this poem. A darkly lit star of a poem. You write this so superbly. Straight out a horror movie script as only a master screenplay writer can create.
John
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Thanks John. I appreciate your kind words.
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Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. That’s what I think. Kick ass write, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You rock Damian. Thanks!!
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Read MoreWe are hideousWe mate and create something horrificSluts and killersMean blood spillersWhores and fuckersFools and suckersMonster fucking dadsSisters born with crabsMonster slut mothersIncest fueled brothersWe the monstersOne nation under a demigodWith obligation and injustice for all
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I feel we are part of a Stephen King novel sometimes. Great write.
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Good Stephen King novels. Some of his novels are godawful. Thanks Jade.
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That is true. Thanks Adira.
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I still thinking Matrix meets Terminator. Way things are going though, could end up like, The Running Man. Powerfully penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can see it happening. Appreciate the comments.
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Read MoreMood Swing # 22: A Stringed Theory as per God ... i spread your thighs part your Sea of Disturbia....in-sert my Serpentine Rod ...
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Lightin’ the place up straight out the gate, I see! 🔥
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Haha!! That nudge is coming back. Thx for the support, hun.
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hello dearest Naajir I love the deep sexy essence to this write
exploring sexuality with a deity and I believe in such
your word choices were on point and the rthym delivered reminded me of a sexual on fire sermon 💕-
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Hey Brenda. Good to see you here. I’ll be droppin by your page soon.
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this is really freaking hot I really felt your vibe I’m happy to see you here too I don’t know what I would do without you guys,,,
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Haha! Diggin this comment. So glad to see you here, hun
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Passionately penned, Naaj. Well written, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Big thx for the support bro. Good to see you still puttin in that work.
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Naajir,
Your word play is magnificent, and I need your Hung Jury stretching my Habeas Corpus. Serpentine me on a platter, baby! Holy Hell…Congratulations on your win! You deserve that and then some… with a bag of chips. I got your dip right here.
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Big thx for your steamy comments, DK. Your response felt like the beginning of a poem within itself. Diggin it
Naaj 😎
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Well Damn. That was a eureka moment.