I tried to feel something
I loved her & she loved me
I don’t know what happened
Everything was going well
Then all of a sudden, I got cold like there was a stranger next to me
I tried to get rid of the feeling but it swallowed me
She asked me what my problem was and how she can help
She was right next to me and it sounded like she was from another planet
I almost forgot her name
I still don’t understand it
I was in love with her and then in a flash, I couldn’t think of a single reason that I should be with her
I left her that night and haven’t spoken to her since.
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Summary:
Feeling Lost. Loneliness, confusion and emptiness wrapped up in love.

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Ugh.
I hate when that happens.
When you know, you just know.
Thank you
Well Damn. That was a eureka moment.
Thanks!
That one took a turn. Great write, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
Appreciate it. Thanks
Best part: “I got cold like there was a stranger next to me…” thanks for the great read!
Thank you Daniel. I appreciate you.
Visions, this packed a mighty punch. You wrote your emotions out with the dexterity of a poet who can really make his feelings known with no room for doubt. Well done.
John
Hello John. This was based on an old relationship I had. Similar thoughts and emotions ran through me at that time. Thanks my friend.