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Read More3rd Rock from the Sun .... burned beyond recognition .........crashed landed.... Spiritually branded Enchanted by that ...infernal Genie in a Bottle Gaslit from Day One...de-deuced from Adamant ....,,,to just a damned ant... Panting...ranting...in past tense .... full of pre-tense Full of Shit... ...a Facsimile therein of...trying to catfish...His own...
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Big thx for your energy on this vibe, bro.
Deeply appreciated indeedNaaj
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Oh, I am glad I discovered this (not for all, but for me) and I must ask you this: have you made any audios of your work? this is only the second one of your works I have read, and it begs the be heard. I must say I’m a bit prejudiced in that, being one who comes from that stable, but this really would be even more impressive aloud. Nice work, sir.
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I haven’t done any audits yet but will be in the near future. Thx for the positive vibes, FD.
Much respect
Naaj
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If you do, let me know; we have a Spoken Word category here now and a lot of us are building a library, of sorts, of diverse works. Check it out; there are some excellent pieces there.
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Read MoreBah humbug it's that time of year,fill our fat bellies,guzzle some beer.Over do everything,shop till we drop,Christmas a circus,a giant big top.It's not about family, not anymore,it's more about getting and what you can score.It's stressful and lonely for...
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It seems that the more favorable holiday has shifted to thanks giving.
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Even Thanksgiving has been corrupted by overconsumption.
How many turkeys were thankful….lol
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreJust hear those lay bells jinglingRing-ting-tingling tooCome on, it's lovely weatherFor a lay together with you Outside the hoes are callinthey’ll be no blue ballin, "Yoo hoo"Come on, it's lovely weatherFor a lay ride together with you Get it up, get...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Only the Dr. Seuss of horror could take this Christmas classic and flip it on its head. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend.
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I was laughing so hard at this. Really good rendition Keith;))
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Appreciate that Fia. Hope you had a great holiday my friend..xo
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Oh what fun it is to ride!!! 😂😂😂
This is so funny and creative! Thank you very much for this wonderful Christmas gift, dear Keith!-
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Thank you Elke. Hope you had a great holiday my friend.xo
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A scorched-earth parody that weaponizes familiarity. The humor comes less from punchlines and more from how far it’s willing to push desecration of a cultural comfort song. Not subtle, but very intentional.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Read MoreShe likes it long in the backShe likes it short on the top and the sidesShe likes it back in blackShe wants to go for a mustache ride I am your mullet manYes I amGonna take you for a ride...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. It reads like lyrics my friend. Excellent write. “Do you know the mullet man? Who lives on dreary lane. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I sure do my friend. He lives across the street from me! Thanks Damian.
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Read MoreEveryday it's on repeatdrink your coffee move your feetTake your brain and then disposewhere it goes, nobody knowsJust keep movingjust keep workingDesperate systemmental prisonKeep on the tracksdo not look backJust keep working hoursthat devoursHopes we're dreamingit's deceivingThis is madnesscostumed...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write about the never-ending loop called everyday life my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the feedback. Thank you
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Brilliantly penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend. Dig the layers in this one it’s a hard hitting powerhouse that’s spitting facts. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian