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Read MoreYou sat on the couch, absorbed in something when I slithered onto your lap, wearing just a sundress. I wriggled around and plucked at your shirt, avoiding eye contact, and blushing a little. So, you knew. “You get cute when you’re...
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Thank you sweet Fia. Just stretching the fingers to see where they end … I appreciate you providing a venue for that exploration.
Thanks again for the kind feedback!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Amazing storytelling my friend. This write is also hotter than two demons fucking! lol. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Two demons fucking sounds pretty hot. (Are their wieners pronged like their tongues? WHAT?! OMG!)
Hey friend, I also appreciate you. Rock on Damian.
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Hot Erotica Star! xx
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Thank you my friend!
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You’re truly welcome, Betty. I’m published 8x over on Amazon, and I can truly say there are 2 blends of sex and erotica out there: filthy dirty sweary red hot (check out My Pregnant Pause and Joely’s Swim LIVE here) and you write that brilliantly!!! Or there’s the subtler, less crude erotica – like my BEINGS – which sells more and got 5-star amazon reviews from women readers. Might be worth you experimenting? HJ Furl xx
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Read MoreYou brought out the chocolate fondue and the platter of fruit, and then, the world was audacious enough to exist. Fuckers. But I never stopped looking back at the neglected supplies, just dropped where they were. Because that’s a real kink I...
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Bravo!
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Thank you!
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write with lots of sticky layers my friend. Appreciate you.
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Thanks Damian. If it’s not sticky you’re doing it wrong… amIright?!
What?!
Hey. Appreciate you back sweet friend.
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Pretty sensational! xx
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Thank you darling, glad you liked it
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When I am alone and there’s no-one else in the house, I promise to turn up the soundtrack to full volume, sit back, and petrify my prim n proper English neighbours! xx
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… as I add cocoa to my coffee. (I always have. LOL)
Your decadence is showing! I am betting that no weight was gained throughout the indulgence!
You have a knack for writing what everyone can see, feel, try, without it becoming over-debauchery. It’s pin point and relatable to all, with their own wishes.
And the bluntness is real world, not fluffy and not mega-porn.
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Well damn, the skirt is short enough. I hope that shit is showing! But don’t look because siblings looking at peeking decadence is still weird in Florida!
Thank you brother. I appreciate you.I have a good handful of these pieces I want to work through before I get into longer erotica. That’s the next venture… wish me luck and keep holy water nearby to wash your eyeballs out.
Thanks for braving my food porn!
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Read MoreYou’ve decided;You're waiting out the wolves, in a bear’s denwhile it hibernates in a bundled ball.- Just my smoking blanket, I tossed it therewhile I warm up the coffee.I’m awake, I’m alert, no matter how stoicI appear in my...
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The poem operates as a rite of declassification: the subject is neither bear, nor wolf, nor man, but the oscillation between all of them. And it is precisely in this instability that love appears—not as redemption, but as a force that anchors the untamed without domesticating it. Very well written, I like it very much.
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How are you, Paulo.
I appreciate your words. And you are right. We are always evolving mentally based on mood or circumstances. This is a whirlwind of a few examples.
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This write is clever with a lot of twists molding into each other. And I love the red kite!
And the heartstrings. I’ll never look at them the same again. I love when you do steamy writes.
Never over done but with a few sharp edges – bringing the heat.
I can’t wait to see your book! And all the works you decide to put in it.Love everything you do plus you;)
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Well I love you being so biased! No matter how down my day was, you cheer me up!
I kinda stole the physical parts of this write from one I ditched earlier in the week. So yeah, this is like a hybrid write. LOL
Ah, my book!? I swear I will get it done baby! You set the bar pretty high. I have to catch up!
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When we read this our mind mind thinks within the piece. Everything that we want is within the cave, truth of self and existence, safety in relation to everything within the cave, all emotions within the cave are real. Outside, there is darkness and every lie that it can hold, There are the teaming deceivers outside totally envious of the warm relationship within, snarling and gnashing their teeth at truth. Tight one dude
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Your comment deserves to be written out as a creative piece. Very enlightening, you are!
And yep, you nailed it pretty accurately, in more sense than I did.
Thank you much for this. It is quite helpful.
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Beautifully written and so well thought out, even though you said your ideas were slammed together. It came together very well.
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Actually it really just blended itself, as the ideas bounced around my head. I usually just write it all out nonstop, once the thought train is rolling. Then of course the hacking and second guessing comes! Not too much though. I try not to over edit, otherwise I end up basically rewriting the whole thing/s. Which is exactly what is happening with my book I’m supposed to be finishing!
Good to see ya, Fia! Thanks so much, too.
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I dig the mix of spiritual and philosophical feel to this, delivered like spoken poetry, that rhythm that begs the reader (or listener) to lean in closer.
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Grant it, you won’t hear me ever reciting anything aloud. I have a glitch. LOL
Yet,I do try to bring interesting writes here. Obviously sometimes the reader sees things a bit differently within the imagery. But that’s okay. We all interpret pour own visions, even as a picture is “painted”.
I sincerely thank you, Wally.
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It was a mess in my head for awhile, and this is the result of that jumble. LOL.
Funny how a few random ideas/lines can blend into something after all.
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Brilliant.
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Thomas, I wish! But I’m keeping that accolade! I’ve been stabbing my head with a pen lately, trying to make my material worth the read. So thank you for the encouragement.
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You are really good at short story writing. You caught the attention and kept raising the stakes. Oh man its good.