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Read MoreHere we go casting on the windsfits of ego dinetiny understanding in the hazea maze of words astoundfalling on the mind heavyWords of power persuadeexpletives of faithlinger in my thoughtspursuing me in my inner sanctumconjuring truth, I askWith halted...
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thank you graciously beautiful Willow 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate you 💕
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Read Moreyour beautiful hazel eyes shoots deep in my soul the fuel to an inferno without it I'm just a untamed wild fire burning down people who come too close that striking white skin with hints of soft pink has me desiring you and the temptation touching a curvey goddess body unchain me my lovely queen the deep...
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Crimsin and
Bluevelvet are now friends
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Read MoreComes now my midnight lover’s callthat softly echoes down the hall.I pull the sheets and lift my head,then slowly saunter out of bedso careful not to wake your sleepwith all the secrets that I keep.He meets me at the...
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If only life was like that…lol
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And death, for that matter.
But yeah, I know what you mean, Peter!xoxo
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Powerful fucking poem. Great work.
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I’m so glad you think so, Thomas! Thank you!
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I think I’d be in sin every part of the day.. if the night started like this! LOL Great poem!!
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Thank you so much, Christoper! I’m so glad you liked it.
xoxo
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Awesome poem Kitten. You sure know know to heat up a page.
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I’m so glad you think so, Kenn! Thanks for reading my stuff!
xoxo
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Whew!!! Intense indeed
Very well written.Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj! Thanks for reading!
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“GULP!” 😳
Well, Dear Poetess,
So much for the site’s pornagrophy rules … LOL!I’m not so sure it’s all a sin
because done over and again,
there’s a beauty in every stroke
of throaty moans sooo softly spoke.“You hesitate, but in the end,
I smother you in evening sin.
By midnight moon, you drown content
between my legs as I repent.” (there’s nothin’ better’n making-up)Not a lot of metaphor, but loads of excellent imagery, giddy flow, smoothly laid syntax, succulent stimulation, consistent 8-count meter, spot-on rhyme scheme ‘n art choice, and presentation appeal.
It’s more than a little obvious this is definitely not your first poetry rodeo … masterfully done, Lady-Poet.Now, excuse me, please, while I dip my head in a bucket of ice! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Wow! Wow! Wow!
What a review, Rascal, and thank you for that! I’m honored. I think you covered everything from mechanical technique to emotional effect. Wait… there are rules on this site? Shit. Let me look that up. Hold up, someone’s at the door carrying fuzzy handcuffs – and they’re not in uniform. Let me take a rain check on that.Rascal, this review is amazing. I’m giddy. Thank you!
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Mmmm!
Something must have inspired me … can’t imagine what it was? ; p-
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I hope you can figure it out…
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This has the feel of a candlelit incantation. Masterfully written