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Read MoreLike an old man,he stares out over the still and calmat age seven,on the slick, red clayby the edge of the pondwhere his brother slipped and slidaway under the milky, glass surface,bobbing up and downlike a corkon the end...
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Different face, different smile from Adira but same effect.
There’s a few ladies on this site that I’d crawl naked over cut glass just to spend some time with….your one of them.-
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That’s such an amazing thing to say, Peter. Don’t cut yourself. I want your body unscathed so I can sign my name on your skin.
xoxoxo
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Dark and engaging . Nice spill
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Definitely and thanks!
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Powerfully penned, DK. This is an incredible write with stellar imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian!
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Outstanding. The wording, the image and the sincerity in detail makes this a marvelous piece of writing.
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When I was young, there were two kids that drowned in the pond across the street… brothers.
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WOW! Tragic.
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I will never forget it. Everyone on my street held hands and made a human chain as they walked across the pond. Unreal.
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You are too sweet, girl!
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Deeply felt. Tragic yet majestic at the same time
Much respect
Naaj
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Hey, Naajir! Thanks for the read and comment. I love hearing your thoughts.
xoxo
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I lost a little brother….🙏
So, this one hits especially close to home, Meg.
Beautifully rendered Free Verse, with all the poetic attributes that make this form so expressively powerful to read and vividly sink one’s mind, heart, emotions, and soul into.No one speaks with a poetic voice like yours!
Thank you ever-so warmly for YOU! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Read MoreSequel to Sperm CountI know many of you think I must be a terrible person. I mean, what kind of professional agrees to personally help a patient collect a sample of semen? What kind of nurse pulls a guy's...
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You’re a wonderful person, Meg. And an outstanding writer. I love your stories and poetry. Expert at writing erotica and by your picture you’re gorgeous. I don’t judge nor would I here. Sorry, I saw this post had no comments and you spilled alot out. Keep doing what you’re doing, Meg.
Danny boy
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Awe, thank you, Danny. Curiously, there are not a lot of ‘story’ writers or readers here. I’m guessing it’s because the majority of the membership seems to be transplanted from DUP… which is fine by me. I usually prefer poetry over prose, but most writing sites cater to prose. I’m good with 50/50, and I’m sure that’s the vision.
If there’s ever been a confessional, this is kind of it. What can you really say.
Thanks for reading, Danny!
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You write your feelings at that moment so well that I can feel as if I am in your place.
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Wow, that’s all I can ask. Thanks for reading, Fia!
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A 10 minute story that held my interest. Not many can do that. You DK always create some marvelous story with explosive detail and imagery. Noting short of being a classic write. Your a talent and know how to stir a man or a woman’s imagination. xxx.
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I am so glad you think so, Keith. Thanks for reading my story!
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Excellent work. You bring it to life. Tremendous work. Stay hard at it. I appreciate you.
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I’m all about bringing good things to life, Thomas. I’m so glad you’re holding my hand.
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Meg, you take me along with you into the scene as I read. It is as if I were there seeing it all, hiding in a corner. Truly exquisite prose artist you are. Your narrative grips me as I read. I can feel it all through your crystal clear writing. You are truly talented. I am a really enjoying these. The ending here has me on the edge of my seat. I can’t wait t read more of this story.
John
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John, that’s such an amazing comment from a talented writer like you. Thank you. I’m so glad you’re enjoying my stories and following me!
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Read MoreAre you ever anxious about the grocery store? I doubt you go outside thinking maybe I'll see her today Do you think about how your face would look when you see me? My doubt cycles over and over... a spiritual shoe in...
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Cleverly penned, Blue. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Go back and edit at the last two lines. There’s a space in the word “shoe”.
We always wonder if past lovers think about us… it’s a natural thing. Particularly at the grocery. And for all you guys out there that fucked me… yes, I remember you – particularly in produce when I’m looking through the cucumbers.
Seriously, Blue – I can relate. Now put your shoes in the dryer and go back for that check out boy.
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The metaphor of the shoe in the washing machine certainly heightens the auditory senses in the overall underlying anxiousness.
Great work Blue.
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I don’t want to be wiping away your smile, girl.
Thanks for checking this out