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hello dearest Benny blushes well yes…thank you graciously you made me smile 💕
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Oh! This is very good, Brenda.
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good morning dearest Adagio thank you graciously 💕
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I drift, happily, into the dripping honey spaces unafraid of the liquids,preexisting and resulting.
Thanks for the respite. ❣💞💦💞-
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what a beautifully sexy comment thank you graciously Jim 💕
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I love that you think so – “..beautifully sexy…” mmm
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hello dearest HJ I truly appreciate the lovely comment thank you 💕
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Powerful. You paint this scene well.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such amazing imagery my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Hauntingly gorgeous. Your emotions ripen through the act and feeling of love into a rose blossoming of desire and passion. I enjoyed this thoroughly. You have the gift of putting passion into a poem of great resonance and deeply seductive all entwined. This is great poetry. And I loved reading this tonight.
John
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Read Morecontemptious need flooding over my sorrownever on the morrow to be let freeit's just another day of sadnesswith knowledge, heavy privy to his holiest's feelingsbedlam vain, I am not enough, I'm afraidlike Cain before me my gratitude is given...
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Crimsin, everything you write is so deep. This is painfully beautiful.
Remember, “For His anger endureth but a moment, but Joy cometh in the morning”
You are loved.-
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hello lovely Alexandria good evening thank you most graciously for such a beautiful comment and thought 💕 I guess this was a conversation I was having with God today sometimes I feel like when he asks something of me I am ungrateful…my heart hurts over this that my first insinct is to be selfish…I truly appreciate you tonight 💕
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I don’t think you’re selfish at all. I think you’re hurting. 🕊️🌾
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously forgive my late response I thought I got back to you on this one ❤️
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Brenda, you have a gift of taking even your suffering and making great art. This speaks to me of a soul hurting but also a talent that is unmistakably the source of true art. You are more than worthy to God I am sure. And not a selfish person.
John
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hello dearest John that is such a beautiful comment and thought just lovely thank you ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Outstanding my friend. You take passion and love for this one person and enshrine it into a poem as divine as it is beautiful.
John
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hello dearest Styxian this really hit home I have trouble listening and have let love slip away because I didn’t love myself enough to fully open up here is the pain of it…this is so very sad and longing but beautifully executed 💕
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Thanks Crims. I’m not much into doing rhyme, but it’s a good practice for staying mentally sharp with creativity.
Love is a type of energy, and they say that energy never fades. It just gets resourced. It’s around us all. We just have to be receptive for it.
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yes of course admittedly it’s something I stuggle with I liked the rhythm of this piece it added to it something I feel…we are on similar wavelengths, I feel tonight I hope this piece is fiction or past tense 💕
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I’m a creative writer my dear. Just as some people write of horror yet it is purely fictional, I too write whatever is interesting me at the moment.
I just got back from seeing Del for a few days. Obviously life is good!
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Evocative lines of syllabic longing. Just a relatable feeling
“Like a book reread, yet a page unturned
Like a match unlit, but feeling burned.”&
“How it all falls, with a sun unrisen
How dark the day, you didn’t listen.”I feel like these lines tie the theme together well.
Like Crim, I’m always trying to still the grinding in my brain and it’s a challenge for some of us…so many missed opportunities at genuine connection lost on being somewhat crazy lol. It seems that ‘longing’ has become a guilty pleasure for me lately haha. Yes, just shut up and listen to the wind….
Always great to see a DUP veteran poet posting something new…great choice of rhyme and slant rhyme….kinda takes me home again, if only momentarily…all those moments I didn’t listen, and I always appreciate a good use of anaphora.
Thank you!
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And you made me look up the meaning of a word…anaphora. So I learned something today! Thank you! I’m always curious and anxious to learn.
I used to do rhymers frequently. But as I evolved as a writer, I got away from it. It isn’t so easy! LOL
I can’t be in here as much as I’d like, time isn’t always cooperative. Yet when I do, I try to make it worth the reader’s time. And likewise, I search for inspiring pieces to read. It’s a good trade. Thank you for the encouragement!
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I swear to everything solid, I have been here. But you painted both the lonely who faded & went away & the left behind. That was an incredible image. Those left behind don’t always care though. Mine didn’t. But many do & this is a gentle reminder to listen & take nothing for granted…least of all love
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Hello Willow!
I think we all have taken a few things for granted over our years. Perhaps especially a relationship. People tend to get too content or what-not. The “What could I have done better?” is an affliction that all too many have been cursed with a time or two. Or, their partner was the culprit. At any rate, I was wanting a solid voice to speak this out for me. Hopefully I succeeded!
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I can relate Styx. Even your rhyming skills are polished. Great poem.
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Rhyming so consistantly and carrying the “n” ending so much was a task! LOL I won’t do many rhyming ones. But I thank you for the props on my attempt. And although AI makes it much easier to do, it matters to me that I did it solely with my own ability, or lack of! 😉
thanks Tim. I truly appreciate it.
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I truly appreciate the,artistry of your cadenced flow. A fitting requirement for the death of love. Well done, well done.
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Whew! This one was work! LOL. And maintaining a sense of meter was obviously part of the task.
Thanks so much for that comment. I’m trying!
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Beautifully penned, Mark. Love the imagery my friend, amazing rhymes, excellent write. My favorite lines:
“How it all falls, with a sun unrisen
How dark the day, you didn’t listen.”
Appreciate you.Damian
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I’d gone back and forth on it awhile, but I really feel that it is good enough as a stand alone, compared to most of my writes.
I have a handful of rhymers, but it isn’t my norm, I know.
I’m all about free verse nowadays, obviously!
Thank you Damian. And I appreciate you my friend.
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I’m not adverse to rhyme as it can accentuate the emotions expressed. You work this well.
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Hey, we gotta mix it up sometimes. Dark, light, free form, structured, etc. It’s how we stay sharp minded!
I will take any form of critique, too. It’s how I know what hits and what misses. Yeah?
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Oh Lordy. How to comment on this!! I got teary eyed while reading. It hits home on a personal note as I’m sure you know.
It is a beautiful write. I feel like I can touch it, it’s so real. This is perfect. Just like you:) -
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But honey, you’re biased! LOL.
I rarely do rhymes. But, yeah, we gotta stay sharp right?
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This poem aches with quiet truth–and is so beautifully written. The way love doesn’t end in an instant, but fades through silence and small distances. The repetition of “gone is” feels like the echo of a heart breaking, and the candle’s hiss at the end is such a perfect image of love’s final breath. Haunting, tender, and deeply human.
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Thank you, Romaj. The “gone is” part was work! carrying that “n” end rhyme through that many sentences was a chore.
But at the time I was challenging myself to come up with a strong rhyming one. It’s not my norm, but hey, we have to be well rounded I think. Thank you again!
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Sounds like a bit more than ‘romantic’…😜