Lyrics of wisdom…
Check spelling on ‘strength’ first line and ‘through’ in the 3rd stanza.
Your meter for this piece is strong, the primary poetic element. It is assertive and authoritative.

Beautifully penned, Jade. This was a wise and uplifting read. Appreciate you.

Damian

💜⚘️

An insightful write! Well done “)

Great insight. Totally diggin this vibe

Naaj

You’re a gem…..funny,clever and a bit sexy….😜

Ok ok …. sizzling hot.

This is heart breakingly …familiar

Fortunately for me it doesn’t happen very often but once upon a time she would have come looking for me….. 😔

Thanks for reading and the comment.
I guess it’s the sad reality of ageing when libidos are not in sync anymore.
It is sad but in an other way it’s kind of lovely that we started a fire,kept it going for years and now there’s not much fuel left to keep it alight…..lol

You’re very sweet and dare I say quite clever with words.😘

This piece is achingly deep. Thank you for sharing.

Yes I love how it looks and its scent. I love perfumes.

This is a collaboration with my friend Jim musics because I see I have forgotten to write it.

I did it. Thank you. 🙂

How beautiful. Congrats on winning!

Yes I saw it later on. I am grateful for that. 🙂 Love and hugs.

its going to work… “Two Chias please Barista,” I already started the order…

do you like your Lattes sweet ? or with a tinge of a dream

Now I know why I like you

Perhaps your dreams will come true and you’ll meet said lady just the way you were meant to. I’ll be sitting close by notepad and pen in hand with my coffee taking notes. Don’t mind me I don’t interrupt