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    Mean

    When you finally saw me Actually, saw meThere could be no other between us, you said Passions Inferno was a blaze.Demons dance, enjoying their bodies intertwined.Angel tears blessed the union Then it was goneWithdrawn as if the ultimate sin was committedNailed to...

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    • Thank you, Hj xoxo

    • hello beautiful Fia this is so passionate and painful I only hope it is fiction love can be cruel 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Fia. Simply amazing write my friend, you changed it up a little on this one. Excellent! Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you, Damian. I always want to try something new. Always appreciate your comments.

    • Awww, Fia =(

      How poignantly vivid your pen has laid its sorrows’ disappointments upon our hearts … so many times we’ve gone through such relatably plaintive ache, yet, your poetic emotion expresses it all so vividly, as though it could be any one of us experiencing your own moments of disquiet.

      “Love is a demon’s creation.
      It obscures and twists the mind,
      That being in complete submergence is good.”

      Oh, yes! Nothing’s like LOVE it when it’s good, when all is wine and roses; for, love shall seek not but for its own satisfaction. It will bend and twist you, and shine and dim upon you, while holding onto those within its grip. And, there is no single answer to the question of what love really is, but I have learned that when love is in control, there are no guarantees.

      I so admire the smoothness and imagery with which you paint emotions, feeling, and thoughts upon the canvas our minds, hearts, and souls … the hallmarks of a true artist’s touch.

      Swearing we’ll never fall in-love again, our needs are far too deep not to.
      Beautiful work, Dear Poetess … thank you for sharing! ⁓ Richard🖌

      Superb artwork choice:
      (V2L1, add an apostrophe to Passion’s)

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    Spiraling out of Control

    Nobody knows whenlove will roll in andwaltz with your crippledsoul.Nobody knows whenthe chickens will comehome, or when the dogwill have its day.I heard of a place wheresilence blossoms intoflowers of wisdom, butwhen I ask for directions,nobody knows.I taste the...

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    innocence with the talented Ambjr

    You enter my pride, tearing me free of my egostripping me bareNude feelings trembleunder your stoic gaze lets peel it back slowlike there’s somethin worthy underneatheven tho we know there’s nothinbut skin scars and warnin signs Your eyes penetrate, burning my...

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    She danced alone.

    She danced alone in the streets.Oblivious to 'their' stares.'They' said she was mad.But 'they' just couldn't hear the music.

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    Vision

    What do the people see?When they are wounded as can be?Do they see light blue skies? Or do they not see them at all?Do they see the starry skies?Or do they only cry out of defeat and fall? Do they walk...

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