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Read MoreSome poems seem to writethemselves;I just move the pen.Others are like lumpsof clay;they refuse to be molded;they need moisture and time.This one is likea robin that just learnedto use its wings.It heads west, on agentle breeze, intoa tangerine sky.
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Thanks, John.
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Awesome write, Thomas. It reminds me of Tangerine trees and marmalade skies.
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Thank you, Alexandria.
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Excellent Thomas 😎👍
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Thanks, Brother.
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Beautifully penned, Thomas. Speaking facts here, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, my friend.
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It flew though! Mine often slam into trees at least once. I love the way you gave the pen over & let it go
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Thank you, Willow.
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I agree with you, Thomas…that some poems actually write themselves, especially the ending, which I find to be quite surprising when the moment offers itself to me. I especially loved the eloquence and poetic nature of a “tangerine sky”. Wow, now why haven’t I ever thought of that? Good to have another transplant from the WC at the helm. Good seeing you, Thomas!
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Good to see you. Thanks. Hello Poetry is another fantastic site.
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Sorrowfully beautiful. Truly artistry in language that flows all the way until the end. You have a talent with words that is exquisite even in its sorrow. Fine art here, my friend.
John
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hello dearest John bittersweet is love in my view thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Never got to read your writing….just couldn’t get past the image of that stunning woman you provided….lol
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hello dearest Benny yes she is stunning I was looking for a more mature woman to go with the poem thank you for your response I spend a lot of time for the right images ❤️
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Lovely, Brenda. Better to let go sometimes. Lovely!
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thank you graciously dearest Daniel I never really let go though ❤️
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Read MoreI have fallen in love with her,and I cannot stop my feelings. A rose blooms in our bed,blooming from a rainy summer. A white petal had fallen onto the bedcover,I picked it up, smelled it,and rubbed it on her lips.She still...
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Loved this so much Daniel. Enchanting and artfully crafted. I was mesmerized as the scene unfolded through your words.
John
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This read for me as an emotional sensual journey with such poignancy at the end. Truly deeply felt poetry at its finest.
John
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Passionately penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I felt the burning of this piece. Well done!
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Thomas this speaks to me of deep abiding beauty in a timeless land. The imagery of the robin just learning to use its wings taking flight on the Western wind is just sublime. Loved reading this tonight.
John