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Read More«A little plant underneath.»I thought.MoistenedAnd in bloom.Among the trees and roots.
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Yes it was what it is intended. In fact I speak about emotions and thoughts here. How much of them go hidden because it is too much for other humans to observe them.
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It works. It is also a good poem because other interpretations can be derived from it.
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Thank you.
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Read MoreOnce in a while,as though pulled in by some desireor force,some decide to take a ride backto Cafe Town.But they find a different neighborhood. One that has since fallen into disrepair.It's not always a long visit.They've discovered going back...
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It does sound like a town that has been forgotten. You described it well, so sad.
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Yes, as sad as it is there was plenty of time to improve things, but…. Thanks Fia.
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I lived there for 17 years. But had to move, the police moved out and glitches moved in. They set up tents and overtook the place.
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I don’t know whether to laugh or sigh at your comment. It was such a great place at one time. Let’s hope this site is a new and better beginning for most of us from Cafe Town. 🙂 Thanks J.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the input, Damian. :)))
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Read MoreCool autumn breeze shrouds my shoulders crisp cerulean brings forth the last of muggy days while flowers set about to wilt Tree leaves burst a montage of color flutter like birds who cavort One can reap a slight rush when wind begs for attention and rips the leaves with...
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This is beautiful. I like the description of the wind begging for attention.
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Autumn is my favourite season – is there there anything that explains that death is an un-permanent? Whatever the long sleep, there’ll be a memory, an emotion, a tear or two, a baby born and happines derived from that wee darling’s first cry. You write with enormous sensitivity to life and also your love of Life and its companions. Many, many thanks for sharing not on fine writing but its meaning.
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As beautiful and inspiring as autumn is, to witness the leaves in their pendulum dance, has a tendency to get me a little emotional. We learn so much from the trees – in their letting go. Your poetic offering of such an eloquent season brings it all into view, Betty. Thank you for your inspiring words today!
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It feels that the plant is not being consulted when decisions about it are made.
Much like little children taken away from their big trees (parents) and transplanted which makes them
really scared, like maybe they won’t ever see family again.
Little plants among giant trees…and they feel so intimidated and lost.
j.