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Read MoreThey tell the story of a maiden.Some say she was as fair as can be.Some say she was young. Or died as old as one can be.They say one day,her soul fell into a deep sleep.For nights on end,she would...
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Damian DeadLove and
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Could feel the hurt in your words my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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An awesome, bittersweet and heart touching poem, dear Crimsin! Brilliantly written!
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Most excellent, my friend. Keep on touching my heart.
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How is it fair to find the perfect one so long after finding your one true love, is it fate showing a sense of humor, Tight
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Brilliant
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Beautiful. Only you can write these sad pieces with such delicate precision.
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Read More"A Slow Turning"The stairs lengthen each season,though the house remains the same.Names slip from my tongue—like coins through a frayed pocket,clinking faintly in corridors I no longer patrol.I misplace mornings,folding them into afternoonsthat arrive already weary.The calendar stares back...
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That’s very good 👍
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Thank you for letting me know, Peter.
You are much appreciated. 🙏🕊️
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hello dearest poet I hate aging and more than that my mortality is showing… this is very well written ❤️
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Thanks for understanding and sharing the heart of the poem.
Your warm comment is much appreciated. 🙏🕊️
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Read MoreWith stars concealed in the sky, it's getting near midnight here on the train platform. The air is slightly damp, and the station lights have a misty aura. The rain's barely even falling yet.From a metal bench, I keep...
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Passionately penned, Tim. Great storytelling my friend with a very relatable story. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian.
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Brilliant work.
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Thanks Thomas.
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There’s nothing wrong with this, so i don’t know what you were wary of?
it’s a great little short with big implications. Where is part two???-
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I don’t think they’ll be a part 2. lol but thanks for the comment, Styx. 🙂
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I’m glad to see it end on a happy/hopeful note. Having been a lonely guy many times, I’d say this fellow’s thinking is right on. I’ve always thought there must be lonely lady for me out there somewhere, if only we could meet. Nice writing–I like your stories.
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Thanks Sam. I’ve been lonely so long it kind of wore out. lol Glad you’re here. Tim (Relic).
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Tim, you painted loneliness in the city with brilliant brush strokes here, in an emotional train ride that will not be soon forgotten by me. This is what great prose can do. it is felt deep down in my heart and soul.
John
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