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Read MoreThere’s a poem that will remain unfinished;its shadow willdrip ribbons of blood.Her imagination was forcefully executedthrough brazen authorityand the bursting ballad of bullets.The verses posted will replace her;will replace her voice;will have to, now.It's one less poet for mankind,one...
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It really is Fia. America is tearing at the seams. Thanks.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent tribute my friend. It’s a tragedy indeed, sometimes I don’t recognize the world anymore. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I don’t recognize it either.
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Silencing beauty is one of mankind’s (and I use that term loosely here) gravest mistakes. We need beauty to get through what comes
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Thanks for the comment, Willow.
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This is the kind of poem that doesn’t ask permission—it reports from the wreckage. “A poem that will remain unfinished” is a brutal, honest truth, and the blood imagery isn’t sensational, it’s earned. I like how you refuse comfort here—no soft landing, no false resolve. The idea that the poems must replace her voice because they have to is devastating. This reads like a witness statement, not a performance. Necessary, angry, and painfully clear.
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Thank you very much for the detailed comment, Thomas. Much appreciated.
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This one hits hard. I’ve watched that video over and over again.
I saw another where an agent told a protester, “If you raise your voice I will erase your voice”…while I’m thinking, then the thunder of the masses will drown him if he does that. I can’t wait for the trials and all the video evidence.
We will say their names forever so they are never forgotten.-
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Thanks for the comment, Wally. I can’t wait either.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Nicely done Crim…
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hello dearest Cipher so nice to see you thank you graciously ❤️
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Chère C.,
‘Where my metal is tested’….
Painting with words!
And then/than (what do I know) the striking art work.
Marvellous work!
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thank you graciously dearest Gus I deeply appreciate you ❤️
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Strongly done, Crims. The strength over fear is always encouraging to read, and to see. To overcome is a human goal always.
Your write defines that well.-
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hello dearest Styxian so good to see you thank you graciously ❤️
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Read MoreI jut out from the long black seama shiny thing, unlike any other in the shaft.Just a speck of brightness,a stark contrastin the endless darkness.I know I'm different.Always have been.The black seam dominates everything down herewith its drab, dour,...
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Yes, you are a diamond. I like how you put this together to show that you are.
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Beautifully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. A diamond in the rough so to speak kinda vibe. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Marvelous…
Wonderful wordplay…
Perfect ending…
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Read MoreHave you ever observed yourself,What you do in a room when you are alone?Well you do something;Something to pass your time;Something your brain tells you to do;And then why do you do exactly that?Why does your brain tells you...
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Why do you do something that your brain wants you to do? Not sure at all. Yet we still do it.
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I often make questions like this and find no answers. 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Excellent observation as always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian for reading and for the support my friend.
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