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Read MoreShe was made beautifulsuperficially flawlessimpenetrable, perhaps.Heaven sent, yet I knewall lofty things crashfrom the weight of conscience. The gods gave her a jarpristine, ornate even thoughof human influences.She kept it close, intimately hers-Had vowed not to open itif she hoped...
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Thanks Fia. I read up on the story a couple of times, and was contemplating adding more gods names dropped in it. But nah, I decided to keep it mostly intimate between the two. The idea was to keep it symbolic, erotic, but not to cross the obvious language of the obvious. lol.
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There is so much power in this write!
Each line conjures such intense emotional pull. Like magnets colliding!
You’r waiting for an explosion 💥 that feels exquisite. You had me at the edge of my seat reading this. Hahah.
Phew, this was intense and filled with curiosity.
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not to mention the connection with the name “Pandora”… I was going to take and use a picture of one of the small jewelry boxes here on the(your) dresser. But the one I used works too I guess.
You know how long I messed with this write. I still see a little bit of edits… But I’m resting it. LOL
Hey, it’s no secret where such inspiration comes from, for me to get ideas like this! What!Pew pew!
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The splendor of your poem filled me as I read with a rapturous yet softly and darkly wonder. I could see Pandora with her jar and the first tentative attraction unfolding until that jar of opened and the tempests come. But after the storm there is a truth in her being that is irresistible and compelling in the utmost. I could feel this in my heart and it was a truly splendorous read.
John
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Much appreciated, John. That’s quite a comment! I was really torn over whether to write of the result of the opening moreso. But decided to end it the way it is. Mostly because the write became a bit too lengthy, so I felt the need to cut it like I did.
Your comment is awesome, thank you!-Mark
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Thank you very much, Bat. This one took quite a bit of work!
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Two face and the Riddler are causing havoc
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Well what a hell of a comment, Brenda. Thanks for that. I’m trying to find subjects a bit unordinary. This one was a leap!
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I am doing well, Damian. A recent trip to Texas (to see Del) was awesome.
Thank you for the supportive comment, too. This one took quite a bit of work, and hacking up the lines, for days. I’m trying to be interesting for the reader/s, so any encouraging words go a long way. Thank you.
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Read MoreRainbow Gathering The northern hills of the Kisatchie—looming!—lyrically, mind you, in a wild, howling, wind-whipped abandon, humping up out of the Louisiana flatlands like great sandstone whales breaching beneath an Arcadian sky! We are out on the edge, the...
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This is very good. Like that they broke bread together with the Boombox playing.
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Thank you so much Fia. And I did indeed like how this came out with them breaking bread together. This is based on a real life experience my wife and I had with a rainbow gathering in Kisatchie National Forest long ago. Though the hippies did make a tea house deep in the wilderness area we never found the tea place though we searched for it. But we did have wonderful encounters with the hippies that day including a young lady who was very much like the Missy in this story.
John
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Read MoreAt first, it hurt Unexpected Confusion To many why’s Mind could not wrap around This reality The circumstances Then it happened again Rage Untamed anger filled my veins Went from why’s To fuck off Mind did not want to dissect The incident The moment it turned Quiet ensued Calm returned Different reality New resolve Once more it happened Done...
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Chère F.,
Hope you’re fine.And:
I will continueBeing me
Yes, please please pleaseWarm regards, Gus
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Hi, I’m good really thank you
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We can only be us through the good and bad. Great ink
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Thank you Nick and I agree with that😊
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You’re on the right track again but now you’re the engine not the caboose.
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Thank you, Peter, going to try to keep going my friend😊
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This one we do like, as we said it makes us think of the phoenix. This is another one for the comeback kid, tight
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Thank you Me.😊
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like Me said, this reverberates like the trials of the phoenix. It’s a good mantra as well, for all who strive to get up and get going again. Well written, Fia.
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Thank you Styxian. I believe it to be true must get back up😊
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hello beautiful anger overcame me today based by hurt and other things and I had to let it have way and then reset so I could find me again this is beautiful ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin🧡
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with a lot of layers throughout my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I like being an onion (lol) layers. 😊
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All you can do is be yourself and you, Fia, are exactly that. What more could ever be needed. Keep spilling those truths, my friend.
“Today is a gift— that is why it is called the present”.
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That statement is so beautiful. Thank you I will continue being Me
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Hi Fia!
This is golden! It needs to be in framed and hung everywhere!You ask why forgiveness
Because yesterday left
Tomorrow is possibility
Now
This present time
Defines what will come
Thanks for posting this!
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Thank you, appreciate that you think it should be framed😊
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This is crystal clear wisdom told with deep feeling and the rich lessons of life. I loved this because it spoke to me on a deep level of what really matters in the end. And I could feel the emotions as they transformed into a sense of peace and forgiveness. This is truly great poetry that is as profound as it is wise.
John
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Read MoreThey say tears are color coded.When it's on,the room flooded.What does each color mean? Are tears always loud or seen?Green tears are a nature's child.They come out when lives are in danger,animals wild. Yellow tears are happy tears.Ones that hide all...
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The concept is beautiful. Giving tears color and the meanings behind it.
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This form of poetry is so entrancing. “That some boundaries are crossed by desire.” Feel that.