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Read Moredo you know what it's liketo sit with your hips & your thighsfrom ass to kneepressed uncomfortably tight...against the person riding yourvery last nerve? when not 5 minutes ago...in full blown fury...you were literally pulling each other's hairwords thrown like rockscolorful phrases...
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hello beautiful Willow this was a twist I didn’t know where you were going it’s very clever and relateable I had to clean my dad’s grandfather clock when naughty 💕
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I hated getting in trouble. It was usually my cousin & her brother. She was ornery as hell too, would try to hug him when he was so pissed. Grandma had to leave the room to hide her giggles. Thank you, Brenda 🧡
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Brilliantly penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Amazing storytelling my friend, I can relate. Not that I got in trouble a lot, but when I did, not a fun time by any means of the imagination. Excellent work, as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Always seemed like disappointing grandma was worse than the punishment itself. So I did my level best to not get in trouble much. Not with grandma, at any rate. 😂 Thank you, my friend
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I love “old timey” pieces. It brings back the good ol days, even if we didn’t know that they were, then. I would’ve preferred the chair over the usual ass whuppin.
But eh, I survived.
It’s always interesting to me how others lived and dealt with their own upbringings. This was a wonderful story indeed. I raised my kids on “time out” instead of spankings, as your story reflects. It’s a better choice.
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Don’t get too cozy in the “old timey” corner. I’m all over the map these days. Who knows where it will take me next?
Yeah, my girl was raised on time out too. Little rascal knew exactly when she was about to land there too. Look me right in the eye & say “I go to time out now?” Good kid…that girl gave me side aches holding in the laughter.
Thank you for the visit. Good to see you roaming the new halls
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It’s good to see YOU here, too.
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Read Morein the mediocre light I find myselfnothing stellar to speak ofdarkness gloom, I desire something specialto entertain divinitywithout losing my mind to the abysswhere oft times I wandermy soul adrifttouching on the etherealmy visions mine to keeppassion plays and...
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Amazing dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian 💕
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The light only blinds and befuddles us, while darkness softly and thoroughly embraces our truth, regardless. There is indeed something special about nothingness -the void- where everything and nothing is possible.
Superb write, my friend!
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hello dearest poet thank you most graciously good afternoon 💕
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hello Mary thank you graciously lovely one 💕
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Read Morea predisposition for depression swaymy feelings follow, and I was waylaidsuccumbing to the malady, I achesinister understanding, it would not alleviatethe darkness cloying devastateAnd in my compromised position, I vownot to placate people anymorethen swallow down my emotionsbecoming sorrowful...
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I suffered from it when I was younger for various reasons. Your poem spotlights it in an artistic way. Excellent poem crimsin.
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hello dearest Tim I understand I suffer from it out of loneliness I can make friends I can’t keep them thank you for the lovely comment 💕
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U got me forever like it or not 😝😜🤪
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Powerful work. Tremendous.
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good evening dearest Thomas thank you graciously 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. I have had problems keeping friends as well, I can totally relate. Superb write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest damian I think my problem lies in the inability to properly set boundaries and when I finally stand up for myself it’s with anger and people are taken aback I think if I set consistent boundaries from the start it woud be better my problem is I see good in everybody thank you for understanding 💕
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Hello Brenda. Magnificent piece of writing here. So many suffer with loneliness and depression. It’s not a good feeling at all. Stellar work my friend. xo
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hello dearest Keith good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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hello beautiful Mary I was watching Wednesday today on Netflix when this poem came to mind I’m happy you liked it I deeply cherish your thoughts 💕
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I love Wednesday!! Thoroughly enjoyed this gothic write:).
There is only one reason to unsheathe a sword! To bring the carnage!-
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hello beautiful Adelphina ahh yes carnage I guess in this write I was going for a willing sacrifice but carnage there would be lol I love your comment thank you and p,s. I love Wednesday too I feel like I was born in the wrong family sometimes 💕
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Brilliantly penned, Brenda. This is an incredible dark write my friend, excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreYou could see in the blush in his faceHe was life itselfHe spoke about the starsWith the same tone he spokeAbout his beloved motherAnd it infected meAnd I was in fire.
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Thank you.<3
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hello beautiful poetess I met a beautiful boy like this when I was fifteen his name was Angel he was so fine great write 💕
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Thank you. I met one last week and was inspired. Love and hugs.
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Aww that blush…love this
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Thank you a lot Fia. Love and hugs.
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Grandma knew exactly what to do with us. 6 of us & she never lost her temper. Good memories…Thank you, girl