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Read MoreYou want chocolate,cake, lollies,sweet on your tongue,you miss themand need themwhen they’re gone.I want your touch.No substitute.When I go without,I crave it hard,just like youand your chocolate.You can go to the shop for chocolate.For me you are the shop.😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘I...
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Thankyou for the lovely comments.💋
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I crave chocolate, and I used to crave the warmth of a body beside me. These days in my older age…the chocolate sates, and the memories of the warm bodies must suffice.
I really like the analogy drawn here.
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love your words…and I love the cosmos, where your lover may reside… i taste the chocolate, because you made it seem so real… much sensuality here and delicious vivid images!!!!
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She’s your shop…That is beautiful.
That last stanza has so much feeling to it. Lovely Peter -
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Wonderfully a d honestly penned. I feel the ache of your words…I know them.
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Thanks fellow writers for your kind words
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Read MoreI offer myself to you twice a day,at morning’s opening, at night’s soft closure an endless vow that neither time nor agecan strip away.I know the reasons you reject my offer:weariness dragging, desire gone quiet,the body’s shifting tides,the cooling...
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Lucky you 💋
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That’s a stimulating offer if your a woman. I hope you received many. Cool write.
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Loved this piece…the offer, the pain, the excitement, and the hope of it all!
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hello dearest Benny lines are drawn and free speech is dangerous these days where if the tolerance and love for each other well said❤
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Thanks for taking the time to comment
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If we find the root. Yes, easier said than done. I believe many prejudices we may hold come from our parents.
We are not born with them. Kids play with other kids, all other kids. And then later on as they grow older, they see and copy.
Can we ever go back to that innocence? that acceptance of everyone who is different from us?
I believe in this poem. And if we can figure it all out, maybe we can first understand ourselves and then understand and accept others. This poem sent me on a journey of introspection. Thank you.
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Thankyou for reading and the time put into your comment.
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This is a very powerful and meaningful writing, dear Peterl!
In my opinion, love and hatred, darkness and light and other counterparts are the two sides of the same coin. Without darkness we were not able to recognize and appreciate the light. Both sides come from the same divine source and are equally important. But it is up to us which side we want to feed energy and establish it this way. We have to BE the love and the peace we want to see in this world!-
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🙏and 💋
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Read MoreWritten by J.DoucetteCopyright © September 2025 All rights reserved.The Result of Never:Life didn’t pauseIt didn’t warn meIt just shifted—and suddenly,there you wereI blinkedI gaspedno way… is this real?YesIt wasfor both of usIn that oneundeniable moment—it wasbut it takes workmutual...
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“where your eyes almost met my soul so many great lines here I can feel your pain lovely lady hugs 💕
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Pulls at my heartstrings, amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A very intense piece.
So much brooding. I hear you.
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Quite beautiful. Love always takes work, but perhaps not so much.
Touching words dear.
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Read MoreForgive and forget Easy to say if you haven't been violated in some way.Forgiving is easier than forgetting, even though our memories of dreadful events are never 100% accurate, which is a good thing indeed. If we dont speak of...
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This whole thing speaks the truth. That last stanza is spot on Peter.;))
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Thanks Fia.
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a very passionate plea that moved me deeply🌹