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Read MoreYou wouldn’t think lonelinesscould breathe between our warm bodies,not when we lie naked togetherclose enough to feel each others breath. But it can.And sometimes, it does.I lie beside you,listening for your soft drift into sleep,hoping,almost praying,that your hand will wander,and...
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![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
Thank you Neville.
Words that make others warm are the best words.🙏
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This is very nice.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work. You bring this to life.
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Thanks for reading and your kind comment.🙏
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Read MoreShe dropped her robe.Naked and defenceless,she stood theredaring meto say something,to do something.But I couldn’t.I was rendered mute and immobileby the beauty before me.My eyes drank in everything,and my mind raced,pulling me backto another momentthe first timeher robe fell...
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Now that is want and reverence to the beauty of the female body. Nicely done
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Thanks Fia
All women are beautiful just some more than others.😜💋
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Peter. This is truly a glorious write my friend and I agree with you wholeheartedly. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The hips of passing years This is a gooder.
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Thanks for the comment Atticus.
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Read MoreMy love returned to me today,after two weeks absent,poked and prodded by other hands.Her slender neck realigned straight and true,action lifted smooth as a lover's curve,that infernal buzzing G-string silenced at last.She needed time away to reclaim her voice,and...
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Beautifully penned, Peter. Into the book it belongs! Nothing quite like the bond of a guitar player and their axe. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous. I can hear the chords now.
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You are so correct in comparing the guitar to a woman. Now, if I could just send my contrary wife off for a new set-up! Haven’t counted them lately, but I have over 20 acoustic guitars. Nice writing–I like it!
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Beautiful.
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Thanks for the like.
I could buy guitars just to admire them.
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Read MoreWhat's the point of life.Other creatures don't ask that question So in some ways human beings are cursed. Cursed because they recall the past, cursed because they imagine a future,cursed because they can think at all.What's the point of...
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Have a nice day 🙏
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Awesome writing, dear Peter!
True love blooms only in freedom! Anything else is dependency or the wish to possess one another.
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Wisely penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend, speaking truth here. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is seriously lovely and not only took my breath away but replaced some of the cold of a very cold day with some much needed warmth .. Neville