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Great! Happy to see you here. Big hug.

hi Keith this is very honest❤

If they were Krispy Kreme, I might understand the urge. But wow, Vol, this is so upfront and in your face, I think it
simply broke the mirror.
j.

Powerfully penned, Keith. Great write my friend, you still bring it. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is a hard hitting piece that tells more about the state of the relationship than about the outer appearance of this woman. If he looked at her with the eyes of love, everything about her from the messy hair to the stained dressing gown would appear beautiful to him. He would only see her inner beauty. But between the couple you describe there isn’t much love anymore.
Perfectly observed and put into words, dear Keith! Xoxo

Kinda felt that way about my first husband. I have referred to him as Fat Boy and tiny-dick. Worst was that despite being nearly 400 lbs (I always say 600) and having a “stub” – he cheated! Add in the violence and threats…I wished for him to die.
It took 20 years after I left but he’s gone!

DAMN! I believe you mentioned “fat boy” & “tiny dick” in a few of your writes. Appreciate the feedback, always!

Well, Damn, the reiteration of Go look in the mirror is a banger. People generally do not see what they become until they are forced to. Keith very, very open write

Zombie’s eating you alive is the worst way to die in my opinion. Nice piece Keith

Powerfully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Walking Dead and nuclear war in such a short piece…impressive!

“Heaven’s the same and where her ribs punch through the silicone drains”

Powerfully penned, Keith. The line above, that’s a fucking line my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful. Sharp and vivid.

Thanks HJ. You rock!

It sounds like blood is on the menu. Intense, I like it

Cleverly penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend, your title reads like a news headline. lol. Excellent work. Appreciate you, brother.

Damian

That’s raw writing! It weirdly reminded me somehow of Nietzsche’s gazing into the abyss. “)

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A powerful and disturbing writing dear friend! That I feel unsettled means that you hit the nail on the head.
In his comment, ME relates to Friedrich Nietzsche and his advice not to look too deeply into the abyss so that you won’t become a monster yourself. You suggest an alternative: you do look deeply into the abyss, light it up and make the monsters visible to your readers. Awareness is the first step on the road to transformation and integration. You did a great job here, Keith! Xoxo