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Thanks so much Gus. Happy that you found something in it!
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Thank you, Adria! Glad you stopped by.
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Read MoreI'm flat,drawn out, stretched thin and empty. Not by living but by love unanswered day by day. As if sands of time, those tiny falling grains, tell me that mountains crumbled and cliffs washed into the sea…and if so...
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You honor me. Teddy distilled intanible feelings that are common to generations into visceral principles. I merely ramble in my own way on common themes, though not many would slough through one of my rambles.🌼
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, especially on the lines you’ll really felt. I.believe your right about, “seek she who can lead to remembrances.”
If one had to describe themselves to another without stating profession, education, faith system, political leanings, family or organizational relationships, what word would describe one’s self best? Would it be lover, fighter, friend, peace keeper, or something else? I am a seeker.
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Read MoreIt starts off full and swelling bursting at the seams as if it will engulf the world in its beauty Slowly, ever so slowlyIt begins to disappearAnd shadow creeps in I secretly prayed for it to stay To embrace me in its warmthMy prayers...
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A good write! I loved your moon analogy. “)
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Thank you, Me;))
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When we’re linked to the moon’s tides…it can get overwhelming. I’m a full-on moon child myself, I get it
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Thank you, Willow;))
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I loved how visual this was, but also in a very subtle way. I could see the sort of waxing and waning pattern but at the same time we weren’t talking about a literal moon, so it was a weird kind of take this very visual thing and make it into a feeling. And then it’s all wrapped up in really beautiful language.
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Thank you, Green;))
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The other morning, I was in a very sexual dream. it was intense! And then my alarm went off and scared the absolute hell outta me. Talk about a rip-off!
Your words reminded me of my own misfortune. LOL
I hope that there is success from your dilemma soon!-
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I was looking out the window at the moon and my mind just went with it. Thank you, Styxian ;))
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An excellent metaphorical take, Fia. Love it.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian:))
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The ebb and flow of the man/woman dynamic.
I digs this
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj;))
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Superb work.
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Read MoreShe slept turned gently on her side,Her back to him, her breathing deep.He lay behind her, hands still tiedBy fear and years and broken sleep.He longed to touch, to press, to feelThe shape he’d loved so long ago.But silence...
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Outstanding! One of the best poems I’ve read all n starsrite… and I mean that. Into the list it goes! Will be checking out your other work.
Daniel
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Thanks for the amazing comment, you made my day!
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Echo the others
This is how erotica is writtenBravo !
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Thank you Poetspeak. I’m grateful that you spent time to read and comment.
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I steer clear of porn for the most part. But this is not that. It has taste and intrigue. It’s a thoroughly enthralling read. Well done.
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Thank you so much. I know I have the tendency to straddle the line between erotica and porn, so I am appreciative of your comment.
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Passionately penned, RPM. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damien! I value your support.
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This was a moment in time, very precious, captured beautifully
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Thank you for your precious comment! Much appreciated!
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Thank you so much. I am very grateful for the comment!
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” The years had left some tangled vines—
But still, tonight, they chose to choose.”Mic drop.
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you…honored that you would read and comment
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Read MoreTime’s sands, slipping through hands. Halo of fading light, the cold of the depth of nightDark halo as portal to the great below. How One could just Slip Away, lips pressed upon a Dark array of the broken day -Consciousness...
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We have no choice but to be here ..
Poets write sometimes in order to avoid Last Rites
BIG
LIKERead twice
Hit me different second time around as the bartender was calling for last round ..-
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Thank you PS… Much appreciated
#Cheers
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Like PoetSpeak, I read this one twice. It has the feeling of a bell rolling in the mist. That question at the end…if you get an answer, I would like in on the knowledge
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Thank you Willow…
<#3
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Powerfully penned, Cipher. This is a deep write my friend, lots of layers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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‘Light lies
in
bright
eyes. Captured in forward and backward enrapture. The light
of
life. The seeming meaning
in the
dreaming. ‘
A core of words needing a home, thoughts laid, meanings personal yet to share. Takes hold on the second read.
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Hoi hoi
Reading time 12 minutes?
It took me 24 minutes. I’ve read it with one hand!
Lovely piece of work!
Love that you wrote it. Love that you posted it.
Kind regards, Gus