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Read Morea predisposition for depression swaymy feelings follow, and I was waylaidsuccumbing to the malady, I achesinister understanding, it would not alleviatethe darkness cloying devastateAnd in my compromised position, I vownot to placate people anymorethen swallow down my emotionsbecoming sorrowful...
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hello dearest Tim I understand I suffer from it out of loneliness I can make friends I can’t keep them thank you for the lovely comment 💕
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U got me forever like it or not 😝😜🤪
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Powerful work. Tremendous.
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good evening dearest Thomas thank you graciously 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. I have had problems keeping friends as well, I can totally relate. Superb write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest damian I think my problem lies in the inability to properly set boundaries and when I finally stand up for myself it’s with anger and people are taken aback I think if I set consistent boundaries from the start it woud be better my problem is I see good in everybody thank you for understanding 💕
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Hello Brenda. Magnificent piece of writing here. So many suffer with loneliness and depression. It’s not a good feeling at all. Stellar work my friend. xo
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hello dearest Keith good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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hello beautiful Mary I was watching Wednesday today on Netflix when this poem came to mind I’m happy you liked it I deeply cherish your thoughts 💕
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I love Wednesday!! Thoroughly enjoyed this gothic write:).
There is only one reason to unsheathe a sword! To bring the carnage!-
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hello beautiful Adelphina ahh yes carnage I guess in this write I was going for a willing sacrifice but carnage there would be lol I love your comment thank you and p,s. I love Wednesday too I feel like I was born in the wrong family sometimes 💕
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Brilliantly penned, Brenda. This is an incredible dark write my friend, excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreVicious eyes,ferocious smile, and anass that begged to berubbed all night, likeBuddha promises good luck.But what thatass brought, wasjail, soup lines, andhomeless shelters.The heart pounds thehead, then the feet poundthe street;walking mile after mile,aimless roaming,doe eyed thinkingWhat went wrong?Where...
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Those assess have been known to stir up a lot of trouble. Sadly, I must stay away from them. 🙂
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lol. Thanks, Tim.
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hello dearest Thomas it this saying her ass got you in trouble? in any case it’s a hell of a story 💕
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yes. lol. Thank you.
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Yeah, a nice-looking ass will lead you down the wrong road. lol nicely done
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lol. Thanks.
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I could eat my meals of a nice ass.
Great write and very true about the power of a nice derriere.
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
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Thank you so much.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Into the book it belongs! Words of wisdom my friend, an exceptional write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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lol. Thank you, my friend.
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Read MoreThe efficiency room days werethe worst and the best.Broke and bent,sick and deranged.Disheveled dreams, likehorses with broken legs.There was an occasionalmiracle.A forgotten five-dollarbill crumpled in thefront pocket of some dirtyjeans, lying by the fakeplant and a copy of Hamsun'sHunger,...
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I had a taste of this life. I know of the family vibe and I too lost some friends. I’m glad it’s all over, but I still have friends lost in that world.
Good one, Thomas.
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Thank you, Tim. I appreciate it.
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Thank you so much.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. I felt these words my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you.
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That was one helluva journey
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Yes it was. Thank you.
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Incredible work, Fia. You’re one of a kind. :))))))
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Thank you, Tim ;))
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Kee up the good work Fia 💋
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Thank you, Backdeckbenny ;))
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Amazing work, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I suffered from it when I was younger for various reasons. Your poem spotlights it in an artistic way. Excellent poem crimsin.