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Read MoreIf the eyes are indeed the windows to the soul then where better to begin the harvest but here in a garden thousands of years from Eden where heathens huddle and scheme using inception to infiltrate our dreams ... ..and so began the fertilization by...
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Big big thx, bro. This one brought back memories of when I wrote it.
Much respect
Naaj
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I’d like to bookmark this but I’m not sure if I did or not. Still navigating like a Luddite here lol. I see you’ve been keen to the dark doings for some time. I’m somewhat of a tinfoil hat veteran myself. Once you merge science with spirituality there is no going back, and nothing can ever be unseen. It takes fortitude…and it’s been taking more & more as the years fly. This resonates, thanks for the posting!
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You’re right about merging the spirit and science. That’s great insight. Much appreciation for your thoughts, Benjamin.
Much respect
Naaj
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An excellent observation on the dumbing down of America. People have become subservient to their phones. They don’t ask questions and they don’t think for themselves anymore. Tic Tock has poisoned so many young people alone. Interaction has been minimalized and your line about big brother is so true. We’re being manipulated for someone else’s benefit.
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You’re about Tik Tok. That’s a very dangerous site. Big thx for the support, Tim
Much appreciated.
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I loved the last line. It reads like a bang to my heart. A heart touching piece. Well done. “)
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Thank you for taking time to read and comment M.E!
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Beautifully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Nice rhythm and cadence, it has an anthem feel. Incredible words my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work.
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Absolutely Awesome! Wow!
The phrases I love… “Sinful Redemption” (A paradoxical escape from salvation)
“secreting the nights away” (A novel spin from noun to verb – clandestine and furtive)
“your truth my undoing” (The curse of understanding)Just an amazing piece of work, girl.
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hello beautiful Meg good afternoon thank you graciously for such a great review 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good afternoon dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕
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Amazing piece Crimsin!
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hello good afternoon dearest poet thank you graciously 💕
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You’re crushing it, Brenda!!! Luvin it!!!!
Naaj
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hi there dearest Naajir good afternoon thank you graciously for a lovely response 💕
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Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you for such a beautiful comment 💕
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“a carbon copy of creation’s
carbon based design
debased…defaced
vandalized
soon to erased
by those who would scandalize
the most basic of human interactions
replaced by something
unrecognizable
where hardly anything makes sense
these days simply because
it was meant to make sense
to someone else”
Naaj, that last stanza drove it home my friend. Brilliantly penned, and you brought receipts throughout. A Masterpiece, brother. Into the book it belongs! Much respect. Appreciate you.
Damian