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Read MoreBlood drips slow from the ceilingOh it tastes like rustHead's poundingSirens screamingMy mind’s combustCops poundingThe door’s caving in“Where were you” they shout“where’ve you been”I’m blankI’m hollowThe reel won’t playNo pastNo shadowJust a foggy grayIron tastes like memoryBitter and coldQuestions...
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Thank you Willow 🙏🏻
Your words truly mean a lot to me.
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Phenomenal lyrics my friend especially that chorus, love the drive of the musical arrangement, the beat is almost trance like. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! 🙏🏻
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This is awesome! I’m sorry I’m late to this post!!
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Thank you so much Adelphina! It really means a lot to me.
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I can’t thank you enough for your beautiful words. I am pretty bad at accepting compliments so bare with me.
Also, english is not my native language so if I say something that doesn’t make much sense, I apologize!But thank you for saying all this to me. Truly.
And no, I do not realize I help people through my words but it is really nice to think I can/do.❤️
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What depravity does the rip tide take you to..
This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
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hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously ❤️have a great night…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian it’s so good to see you I thought we lost you thank you graciously❤️
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Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡
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hrllo beartiful Willow thank you graciously❤️
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Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.
John
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hello dearest John good evening I am blushing from your beautiful comment thank you graciously ❤️
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Fia Naturie and
NAVINA are now friends
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Dude the pic alone deserves a host of comments, there’s nothing wrong with letting it mature a little. Tight work
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You so have to watch out for those old ones. They can put some shit on you.
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Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
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Read MoreYour love is like a frozen bird, afeathered stone falling from the sky.I wish it didn't die.It should be flying, and soring, andhealing, against the warm blaze ofthe afternoon sun--weaving anddiving through the coolness of the clouds.But it's gone,...
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate it.
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A little sad, but beautiful in it’s own way.
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Thank you.
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This is characteristically a Case of excellence .. write on brother Tom .. Neville
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I appreciate it my friend.
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I’ll bet a lot of us (guys) have interacted with these birds before.
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Thank you.
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Thomas this took me on a journey into the heart of love and the sadness of lost love. I may be wrong but what I read as I read this seemed to speak to me of a man remembering his beloved who has passed from this earth. I have known this emotion so closely that your poem enshrines with poetry for the ages.
John
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This has a surreal aspect to it. The iron tasting like memory is brilliant. Mind sees blood